Roughly edited chapter 62: http://pastebin.com/tk2Hb436
Please help me improve the edit.
Chapter 63 is also available. All hail tlanon.
Oh, it's quite late and it may have been adressed already, but a テレホンパンチ is most probably a "Phoned punch", which means a highly prevedible, easily dodgeable punch.
Also, please tell TLAnon to pay attention at when he should use "it's" and when "its".
Besides that, awesome work, i owe TLAnon a lot.
>Aren't the religion of trash-king country a perfect description of brainwasher?
If you're taking a few liberties:
"Doesn't the religion of trash-king country fit the description of brainwashing perfectly?"
>suspicion was conceived by church from a month ago
conceived by the church a month ago
>The current situation undeniably support
bleh, I only end up finding more grammar errors than actual changes. Maybe after I get some sleep.
Morning /a/ tl anon here. I read the edit and wow it looks pretty great, good job. I'll start working on 64 and hopefully have it up within the next two hours.
Do I have your permission to copy/paste your edited version over mine? Just for the sake of more people being able to read it.
I like it so i'll go edit chapter 46