The story of a young mutant with extraordinary abilities who sets his sights on raping and enslaving the most beautiful women in the Marvel Universe.
Story and art by me, Pegasus. Let me know what you think! Any and all feedback appreciated.
First chapter: Emma Frost
Tittyfucking a defenseless heroine against her will
Breaking her willpower and turning her body against her
Driving her forcefully to the greatest orgasm of her life
Feeling her begin to accept it and knowing her mind is broken
The mighty, proud Emma Frost, reduced to a plaything
Choking it down her throat, something she's never done before for any man
He uses her body like an object and cums hard in her mouth, ballooning her cheeks with his load
Emma Frost has been forever changed, her mind warped, her body violated, her spirit crushed and remolded. She will serve this boy without question now, and be his slave until the day she dies.
Any thoughts so far? Likes? Dislikes?
The formidable Psylocke, powerless to prevent this humiliating rape
Fucked from behind like a common whore, Betsy has no control and can only scream and cry as she is taken
As his mutant pheromones overwhelm her, Betsy's body tenses and builds swiftly toward orgasm
The climax shatters her and Betsy knows almost instantly that she has never cum so hard before in her life, the pleasure chased by a deep feeling of shame at this fact
Her tormentor sends Betsy spiraling to new levels of humiliation, filling her most private orifice with his pulsing shaft, taking her where no man has taken her before
Her rapist cums deep in her ass and her body follows suit, rebelling against her tortured mind, wracking her with wave upon wave of unholy ecstasy
Betsy's mind is reeling, her sanity slipping away just as surely as the last dregs of resistance she expresses wither to nothing
She blows him, this boy who has taken her and broken her with ease, devoting herself to him, gifting him with attention and loving adoration she has never felt for another lover
When he blows in her face, she opens her mouth to accept his sweet-tasting cream, resistance a distant memory now
When Betsy awakens, alone in her room, the memories of this terrible dream, of her capitulation and submission, come flooding back and haunt her. Worst of all is the knowledge that this will all happen again. And she can do nothing to fight it.
The boy rapist sits triumphant as the former heroine Emma Frost slurps on his cock, tending to him with all the respect of a slave for her Master.
I read abunch of these on exhentai, pretty good.
Only thing I wished was for was more time to bask in the obedient afterglow. Usually the only submission is during sex, I'd like to see some after and between.
I really like your stuff. It hits my mind control power trip fetish pretty nicely.
In the comments on exhentai I think I read something about some of this stuff being traced.
Not that I particularly care, as finding MC stuff with good art is nearly impossible, but do you want to respond to that at all?
So, wouldn't by shoving his dick in her mouth, he'd give her the powers he has, which would be addiction to cum, which is in his body already (being male and all) and he'd be addicted to her too?
They live happily ever after having sex 5ever
Don't try to explain anything using canon when it comes to this stuff, Superman got stabbed to death with a regular old sword in another series he's done.
I like this artists stuff, even if a lot of the pages can be linked to a few different artists. But what I dislike is that the main antagonist is nothing but a Marty Stew. Nothing can stop him, which is boring, that and there's a lot of unnecessary mass murder of the male heroes.
Would be nice to see something using different themes for once, I think.
Hi, op here. Just wanted to make it clear that there's no tracing in any of my work. I have referenced poses from other artists at times but the situations and stories are original and all my work is done freehand.
Author possesses an inferiority complex and feels very insecure about his masculinity, leading to his focus on stories of seizing power from powerful women. Author holds a very immature view of sexual encounters, probably has little to no sexual experience. Author also appears to be suffering from a severe inferiority complex, fueling his writing to be heavily focused on how powerful and in control his self-insertion fantasy is. Author has a strong oral fixation and focuses heavily on the breasts and mouth during his story. Author most likely feels a lack of control in his everyday life, causing his to seek out personal fantasies of control and power.
Based on given information Author is probably in his late teens and is not overly confident in his artistic abilities but wishes to appear skilled, indicated by his tracing a great deal of his work and claiming it as his own.
Hope you appreciate my feedback/basic psychoanalysis OP.
Took psych 101 and thinks he's hot shit. Has little to no literary awareness and is unable to distinguish between author and implied author. Thinks sexual prowess is the measure of a man and attributes far too much importance to it. Feels the need to flaunt his 'abilities' in order to make himself feel better, most likely feels a lack of control in his everyday life, causing him to seek out personal fantasies of control and power on message boards. Cannot cope with the stress of actual conversation and criticism so therefore does it on a board for porn.
Displays a great deal of passive-aggressive personality disorder which is defined as a "pervasive pattern of negativistic attitudes and passive resistance to demands for adequate performance in social and occupational situations".
Conclusion: author of analysis cannot perform adequately in social and occupational situations and lashes out.
Haha, nice rebuttle.
Also why do all psychoanalysis focus on the negative aspects of the personality? Generally curious , you never see any that mention the positive aspects or strengths a person has.
Also also while I'm not a huge fan of rape and domination comics, the art is really good, you show great line strength and knowledge of form, applaudable consistency in drawing quality between panels (harder to do than most people realize, I've done a few comics but stick mostly to sculpture myself) and the expressions are pretty on point. From what I've seen of the coloring that's pretty good too, though I'm a fan of using more high contrast but that's personal taste more than anything else
>why do all psychoanalysis focus on the negative aspects of the personality? Generally curious , you never see any that mention the positive aspects or strengths a person has.
No idea, I'm only a literary academic. We see the psycho-analytical method used on literature but don't see the underpinnings of it or how its constructed.
My assumption is because its easier to find faults than to pinpoint virtues and because psycho-analysis assumes a 'problem' or 'fault' that must be found and fixed in their patients. (like a regular doctor I assume). Though there are positive analyses, they always flow from some kind of perceived flaw according ot psycho-analysis.. (e.g. Very helpful and respectful of others: probably requires validation)
Although your comic feels a bit too rapey and mysogynistic even for a MC enslavement fan like me, the art is pretty solid, good job. You should really work on the quality of scans or try digital inking your drawings (PaintTool SAI is excellent for this).
Also, I've only read the Emma Frost one, but it seems to me like all he really did is date rape drugged her, there's no indication of anything else going until he explains it explicitly at the end. Maybe you could somehow make his influence on their minds more apparent and the break more gradual (now it was several pages of "fuck you" followed by complete submission and "yes master"). Just my two cents.
To all the people accusing the OP of tracing: even if he does, tracing isn't necessarily bad in and of itself, many classically trained illustrators and artists did some tracing (e.g. Alfons Mucha). It's not that easy to make something traced look good, try it sometime. The problem with Greg Land is not that he traces, it's that he uses ridiculous porn references for superhero comics and the effect is jarring.
going to be a comic autist here for a brief moment.
Emma's crystalline form stops any attempts at mind control, even able to repel the phoenix force for a time.
So yeah, she goes diamond, dude is rubbing his dick on sharp rocks and no longer able to alter her mind.
If we were going by actual comic logic, the Beyonders would have shown up by now and destroyed his ass because they take offense at someone else being the biggest douche in the universe and not them.
Because she's in a dream state for one thing and her defenses are down, and because he's molded her mind into Emma's body, which has none of the conditioning or muscle memory required to utilize her ninja training.
Yeah okay but why doesn't she tell other heroes, like, not mutants, about the guy now?
Or is this the kind of shit where everyone's retarded and this teenaged fuccboi is somehow able to beat an Asgardian?
Because to her, it WAS just a dream. If you had a dream where you were raped and humiliated and made to love it, how many of your close friends would you feel like sharing it with? Then again, perhaps it's her own secret desire to repeat the process when he comes for her again that causes her to keep quiet.
Rogue takes her reward. The heroine is gone, replaced by a slave, a sex kitten devoted to her one and only Master. Her old life is over, and a new life of depravity and submission is just beginning.
I gotta ask, Pegasus. are her button placements intentional or do they just accurately match where they should be on her jacket? I mean i see that sort of thing many times, but never really asked about it
A goddess takes her first order in a thousand years, as her new existence as a slave begins. Even the mighty Enchantress crumbles and falls like any other slut before our hero as his Agenda picks up steam and he gains another recruit...
Let me know your thoughts!
That jacket was based on many designs I looked at when crafting her outfit. Including the image attached.
>Even the mighty Enchantress crumbles and falls like any other slut before our hero
Our boring, unlikable, invincible "hero..."
>Let me know your thoughts!
It's hard to stay engaged with this, frankly; there's no conflict, not even the slightest chance that the outcome will be anything but "he wins." It follows the same formula every time:
>He wants to fuck superheroine
>She puts up some token resistance while he calls her a whore
You had a great opportunity for something interesting to happen with Rogue, whose powers are that SHE CAN ABSORB OTHER MUTANTS' POWERS, and you instead went with "your powers don't affect me... b-because!!!"
I know it's porn, but mix it up a little bit - your audience will thank you for it.
Also all the women have the same body. It's a great body, but again - give me some fucking variety here.
I'm not entirely sure what's unlikable about the hero. Care to elaborate? I mean he's committing horrific acts of violent rape and humiliation, but that's the name of the game.
This is a story about the heroines losing. There are plenty of stories where Batman wins, and w all know Batman's going to win, but we keep reading his stories anyway.
Also, it's porn. I'm typically trying to move the plot along as fast as possible to get to the fucking.
Thanks for reading though
People root for atrocious fucking people all the time.
This protagonist is fucking unbearable for all of the wrong reasons. He's a smarmy little shit who has all of the answers, all of the counters, ALL OF THE POWERS for literally no other reason than because the plot says so.
There's been no resistance, there won't BE any resistance, because if anybody that could pose a threat hasn't already been defeated or conveniently died in the background, he's just going to pull another random "I WIN XD I'M SUCH A COOL AND SMOOTH TACTICAL GENIUS HURRRRRRRR XDDDDD" button out of his ass and they'll be neutralized within the minute.
No reason to get invested in a protagonist that you can't even love to hate, because he's SO FUCKING BORING, and you know there's not going to be anything interesting. There's not even the pretense of a veneer of a SIMULACRUM of anything interesting, because as you've just said, you don't give a shit about having a plot because you're just wanting to churn out the fetish as fast as you can.
You'd be better off cutting BuckoMcFucko out of the picture and running with a completely faceless whothefuckever so that you don't even have to try to make him work, because so far, you're trying and it isn't working. Faceless overpowered entity? Don't even try to explain who he is or how he is because you just can't manage shit on that level.
He'll be just as boringly invincible as this current failure, but you might just be able to squeeze out a drop or two of mystery as to how the motherfucker accomplishes shit. Plus, hell, it'll be all the easier for the niggers reading this because it's their actual fetish to imagine themselves in his shoes.
Plot? Scrap the plot. Dump this shambling mess out the window. You clearly don't care to or possess the talents to assemble a proper progression of events, so I suggest you make your little power raep sequences in neat little bubbles so you don't have to bother with trying to make anything more than that
Comparing him to Batman is a stretch.
Batman is prepared and has a plan for just about every contingency. He comes out on top because he can outwit and outmaneuver his antagonists, and even though we as the audience know he'll be victorious, he still occasionally gets laid low and has to work his way back up to the top. It's a bit like a chess game - sometimes you lose pieces, but if you're smart enough you can still win.
Your main character is more like Aizen, if you ask me. He's always got the advantage and everything goes his way; he's never at any risk of losing and he wins at everything forever because... because. There's no thought or explanation to it - he just wins. It's not even a game anymore, it's just saying "I win!"
That's boring. He's boring. And that's the real problem with him.
It's a bit like that kid we all knew who picked "invincible" when you pretended you had superpowers.
Nobody liked that kid.
Honestly, if all you care about is the fucking, just draw the fucking and don't bother with the story.
I don't think anyone here came for a story. We got hot women submitting, exactly what was on the cover. This is just porn without plot. There's no need for a real story here, nor for us to get caught up in one so there shouldn't be a need to be a dick about it.
For me, this is way better than the DC story where this is slightly more plot, but it's just bad. And hard to get off to when every other page is one of your favorite heroes getting killed and maimed. But this... I'm fine with.
Don't bother. He never listens. He did the same shit on /co/ for a long while, getting bans, then coming back to try and shill his traced artwork again. Even when proof of tracing was shown he still denied it and asked for input, which he continued to ignore.
Also the self insert mary sue is still insufferable and he fucked up Black Cat by not giving her kitten ears or even vaguely cat themed apparel making her just another generic looking character like all the rest of his stuff.
>The boy rapist sits triumphant as the former heroine Emma Frost slurps on his cock, tending to him with all the respect of a slave for her Master.
I agree to some extent. As with most western shit, the author takes his fetishes way too seriously-- the domination fetish completely obscures any semblance of narrative.
This post makes me cringe.
>I'm only a literary academic
>Let me make up a reason anyway because I am skilled at spewing bullshit.
OP's back. Continuing with Mary Jane. Keep the comments coming!
A knot forms in MJ's throat as he reveals himself to her. She wants to flee, but can't make herself move.
He commands her with a gentle voice, and before she can question it, she obeys.
His musk is strong in MJ's nostrils as she kneels before him
His tool is hard and warm in MJ's mouth and she suckles it, caressing the head with her tongue, exploring its texture
He's urging her on as his prick stiffens between her lips. She knows this is wrong, and yet it feels... good. Like home.
Precum leaks into her mouth and she swallows the nectar, sucking hungrily for more as he intones for her to take it deeper
Now his hand is on her head, forcing her downward, forcing his steel-hard cock relentlessly down her throat. Mary Jane struggles to open her throat for him, tries to breathe through her nostrils. No man has ever treated her this roughly, this crudely, but she... she likes it.
The taste of his precum is thick on her tongue, overwhelming her senses, consuming her. She feels the hunger now, the deep pit in her gut that she knows instinctively can only be quenched with jism. HIS jism.
don't listen to the hate keep the comments comin
also appreciated the whores of darkseid issue
She sucks him deep once more, heartily, wantonly, consumed now by her thirst. This is as natural as breathing, she realizes. And just as essential. To know she can please him... to receive the gift of his cum... means everything.
He erupts mightily over her face, a face that's been on magazines and billboards, cascading his godly cum over her features in hot ropes, shooting directly into her open mouth and coating her tongue. By the time she's swallowed... she already wants more.
Mary Jane feels a rush of pride as she disrobes for the young boy she now knows is her Master, as she sees the hunger in his eyes. She's been desired all her life, has made a good living off her looks, but it's never meant as much to her as now, in this moment, standing in front of the only man who matters.
Her whole mind and body, her whole essence, her soul, is devoted now to pleasing him, and him alone. Somewhere, deep inside, a fundamental truth has awoken in her -- that she has always been waiting for this man to come and claim her, to make her feel like a real woman, to debase her and degrade her and give her the greatest gift -- a true purpose in life, a life as his concubine and slave.
His cock is firm and rigid between her mammoth breasts, pulsing and belching up dollops of his precious load to smear into her soft, yielding tittyflesh
She sees the lust in his eyes and thrills at a job well done, knows she's driving him crazy with desire, stoking his own biological need to burst and coat her once again with his sweet, heavenly semen. Her hunger is at a fever pitch, ringing in her mind, driving her deeper down this road of depravity and submission.
When he throws her to the ground and claims her cunt in a savage, single thrust, MJ knows contentment, knows perfect pleasure, like a crack addict getting her fix.
He fucks her like an animal, roughly, taking what he wants, using her body like the property she knows it is. Waves of ecstasy she never could have imagined race through her unchecked, blinding her with lust.
No man's ever fucked her like this, given her this pleasure she only dreamed about. Not Peter, not Harry, not Flash... What she feels for her Master is not love, it's beyond love, beyond devotion even. He owns her, purely and simply, and she knows he will own her forever. Her mind and her body are no longer her own, but his.
She hears herself begging for his cum, urging him onward, sealing her own capitulation in this moment of frenzied lovemaking. If he doesn't give her his cum soon, she knows she will lose her mind.
The orgasm is a white, fiery spear of ecstasy in her heart, brain and cunt all at once. Nearly blacking out from the overload, she convulses under him wildly until she feels him pin her down and begin shooting into her, filling her pussy to overflowing in moments. She climaxes again, then again.
>I wish you'd do girl on girl stuff.
Let's say the "power to negate powers" here isn't a gimmick for self-insertion but just mutant pheromones. It would be far more believable to have unexpected drawbacks. Sure, Rogue can kill by touch, but with other mutants she knocks them comatose and temporarily steals their powers. In Evolution, she was roommates with Shadowcat. If OP really wanted to go full lesbian, there's an angle.
But don't count on it.
This, each one is the exact same body type.
Also his taste in Marvel girls is awful, he's picking some of the worst ones imaginable nearly each time. Other than that its pretty good stuff.
I'm fine with his taste but like at least stop giving them lip injections and work on some different expressions. The no face is the same as the I love cum face. And it's the same formula every time. Have them actually fight more and make it last longer.
If you wanna self insert at least give yourself a challenge. It what I would do.
Yup, to show how absolutely retarded it was.
Did you think both of those were meant seriously? The first Freud-wannabe thought he was being clever and providing scorching hot burns. The second guy mocked him by doing it to him, he even copy pasted part of the other guys response.
All that effort is pretty pointless when you do the same story over and over again. It shows how overwhelming you fetish is to your actual ability. There is no real point.
And tracing is a sin. Posting traces as your actual work is an insult to everyone.
I'd say he's probably alot older. The Mary is clearly an idealized versions an of him and that lends credence to the thought that he is younger and obviously better looking with more hair. Over all it is clearly the Mary is a combination of the author and Peter Parker.
The OP is clearly Dan Slott. Anyone who has read Spiderman recently would notice this.
Cringe worthy dialog.
Chris-chan level insert.
Faget misogyny anons.
Faget capeshit nerds.
are people here really upset aboutmisogyny in a RAPE MIND CONTROL COMIC
this is beyond sad. if you dont like it don't read it. you people are that mad this guy is basically posting the same comimc over and over again? I'm not, I've fapped 3 times to this thread in the last 2 days
Hey opee, I like your comics. People being autistic about it is bound to happen, you shouldn't be held to moral obligations by the internet porn police. You trace sometimes and that's completely fine, you still draw well when you don't and the end result is good so I could care less. Thanks for posting oc.
Maybe a comparison with something more vanilla will help make things clearer.
>A story about one guy character and a girl character meeting and then falling in love in an organic, convincing way
Even with identical subject matter, critics are sensitive to how it's dealt with.
I've always found this comic to skirt the line between what feels like "fantasy pretend rape porn" and "actual rape porn". And I guess that's fine for people who like that, but with the self-insert it really feels like you're sitting down and watching the writer masturbate.
Does anyone else here hate how these comic chicks always have gigantic, comically ridiculous sized tits? What's even attractive about that? Why can't these chicks ever just have normal tits, that is not attractive.
Yeah that's a great way to to see improvement- anyone who says anything even remotely critical is a hater asshole.
To think I half liked these comics until I found out how big of a cuck the creator is, replying to himself over and over, jacking off to his traced art
Real quick, you need to draw smaller tits. For serious, some of these girls just aren't that well endowed. Let's have a smaller body type.
Secondly, I want to see the girls smacked around more.
Thirdly, this is super hot stuff. Thanks!
>Also why do all psychoanalysis focus on the negative aspects of the personality? Generally curious , you never see any that mention the positive aspects or strengths a person has.
Because it's mostly used by knobs who want an excuse to talk down to people
How about Wonder Woman?
>Lasso of Truth
>She's a fucking Amazon
>he tries his usual "now your powers don't work, time for sum fuk"
>gets his shit shoved in
>She hogties him and demonstrates how the Spartans used to "educate" young men
>the whole time he's crying and saying "this isn't how it works! I can't lose!"
>then she keelhauls him, still naked and dirty, behind the invisible jet, just for laughs
If not Wonder Woman, then just someone from DC comics. It seems appropriate.
OP here, back with more fun. This time, Scarlet Witch.
Keep those comments coming! Enjoy.
With Wanda fucked out of her mind and covered in cum, another virtuous heroine falls into the pit of depravity known as the Submission Agenda. Who will our hero choose next?
Let me know your thoughts!
So far my favorite is still Emma, it seems like the simplest/requires the least suspension of disbelief. She's also a good subject because she flaunts her sexuality as a primary aspect of her character, so to see it turned around on her is very satisfying in a way it's really not for the others, except maybe the Enchantress. Keep it up!
Dialogue has never been a strong suit of yours, but thissun was pretty damn special.
>JESUS SHIT THAT'S GOOD
>FUCKING MOTHERFUCKER FUCK MY ASS FUCKING DEEPER
>So much cummm
>I ain't through with you, not by a damn sight
Says the intrepid frontier outlaw
>you're all the same
What an insightful statement, perhaps a deeper commentary on the lack of body variation in the artist's own work?
>SWEET FUCK, YOU FEEL SO
A comprehensive source for sexy wordplay, Brazzers is not, mang.
You're all criticizing OP about his writing ability, even his fucking art (even if it's traced, it's still fucking great, and OC; which is a lot more than you chucklefucks can contribute) as if this isn't a silly power fantasy involving rape and super heroes.
It's not a fine fucking wine that requires maturity and intellectualism, it's a cartoon on the internet of people fucking.
Please think twice before posting some high minded comments about the lack of story quality, instead, just fucking put a barrel in your mouth and pull the trigger because this planet doesn't need anymore fucking autists on the spectrum.
Good job OP, I want more.
I don't know, I quite liked the dialogue in this chapter, maybe because it wasn't full of the usual "No" and "Please" medley. It seemed more natural, and her submissive state of mind came across well in her words and actions. There's something to be said for a character who is usually pristine and proper using filthy, vulgar, whorish language. As for all the grunts and groans... it just made me imagine the wildest, roughest sex ever B)
I think the amazing thing in this comic is the consistent disrespect he shows for the heroines as he reduces them to whores. With characters this beloved, I'd expect more deference maybe? But instead, down the line, he really berates and insults them before (or after or during) humiliating them. It reminds me of the Warlord comics, with less violence.
OP, back again. posting a short Emma bimbofication I dropped in another thread, thought you might enjoy it here. Let me know what you think!