(Last thread got deleted. But I want to finish! )
>You remembered the coins you took from the cockgoblins.
>You throw the coins to the ground.
" OH! My babies! "
>The jew looses focus and drops the the ground to collect the coins.
Eat shit jew!
>You punch the vile creature with all your might in his giant jew nose! It was hard to miss! A direct hit!
" ARHH! HOW COULD YOU HIT ME YOU NIGGER, YOULL PAY FOR THIS, ILL SUE YOUR ASS! "
>You do a sweep kick at his bag of gold! It goes flying across the room!
" N-no! Noo! Aghh! "
Without your gold you're powerless HEBREW!
>The creature falls to the ground. Defeated.
"Y...you win! I am defeated... "
>The creature falls to the ground, he wont be getting up again.
>You think now is a perfect time to look around the room.
Where that treasure!
>You look around the room in awe.
>The sweet scent from behind the chair wafts into your nose.
>You throw the throne to one side! Revealing a large door, and a warm, pleasant breeze comes through,
>You want to take everything that isnt bolted down, but you know the treasure is right behind this door.
>Suddenly! A the floor shakes beneath your feet!
>A loud roar is heard behind you!
" I WONT LET YOU TOUCH A SINGLE SHEKEL NIGGER! "
>You spin around and look up. Fear strikes you to the very bone.
>The jew...hes..GIANT! A MEGA JEW!
" HA HA HA! YOU CANNOT DEFEAT ME! I AM ETERNAL, I WILL LIVE, FOREVERRR! I WILL NEVER LET YOU HAVE THE TREASURE! "
>You've worked so hard for this! You've gotten so far! You cant let something like this get in your way! Youre so close!
>The walls shake and the preasure inthe room can be cut with a knife.
Bring it on!
>This is the final fight!
>The mega jew makes the first move.
>It lunges at you with great speed!
>You dodge out of the way at the last second.
>He power is on a another level!
>His strikes destroy everything in his path! Debris goes flying in all directions!
>Youre hit! A devastating blow!
>You wish you could lure the jew back into the trapped room from before, but hes blocking the path!
>He continues to fly punches at you!
" YOU WILL DIE HERE NIGGERRR! HA HA HAAA"
>In that instant, you remember her.
Waifupillow....Give me strength!
>That last hit was painfull...
>You're getting tired, this adventure has gone on for what feels like days...
>You cough and spit blood onto the floor.
" RROOOAAGGGHHH! "
>The mega jew is coming in to land the final blow.
>In that instant, everything stops. The dust stands still in the room. The torches on the walls stand still.
"Yes... You can defeat the jew."
Hes too strong! I cant!
" You can, you can save the world Annon, the treasure will be yours. You just have to believe in yourself, like you believed in me."
B-but you're gone.....Why did you have to go?!
"Im not gone, Annon..Im right here, with you, forever..."
>Time speeds up, the moment has passed. A new fire burns brightly within your heart!
>You charge towards the creature!
"ARUUUGGHH NIGGGERRRRRR! "
>This is the final clash!
>You swing right for his chin! You feel the will of everyone who came before you pushing your fist upwards, giving you more strength!
>DIRECT HIT! You feel the force of the blow leave the back of the creatures skull!
>The mega jew staggers backwards and lands in a giant cloud of rubble and smoke.
>The battle is over.
>You pant franticly and wipe the blood from your brow.
>Its been rough but you've made it here. Theres only one thing left to you.
>You look onward to where the throne once sat,before you burnt it and threw it to one side.
The treasure...is mine.
>You walk triumphantly towards the door. Annticipation on your lips and the sweet smell filling your lungs, breathing new life into your soul.
>You step foot on the threshold of the door.
>Before you sits the girl of your dreams, sweet and innocent, a heart of gold.
>The purest maiden.
>She turns to you with a smile.
“ I knew you’d show up! Come on lets play! “
>Tears come to your eyes, you don’t even attempt hide them.
>The rewards of your journey laid bare in front of you.
>It was a long and painful road, but its all come to an end.
>Half Life 3…
>And someone to enjoy it all with.
>You did it.
OP you are awesome
here's both threads
Are you SIR though, OP?
Even if you aren't, do some work on your art fundamentals
Thanks for sticking around until the end too, I appreciate it.
I might make another dungeon in the future... Or we can play this one again in a couple days and go down the first dungeons rout. (The dungeon with the harpoon)
But the time travel rout was quite fun. That was originaly the first dungeon, and the dungeon with the harpoon has another boss and different treasure.
Part of me wants to make this into a game, but who knows.
best thread i have seen all year.
we want another story in the future.
please tell me someone archived. i was too engrossed
It would take more time to turn into a game, perhaps draw a map with a grid system with left/right turns with rooms in?
We could navigate and you could explain the story, once we have enough information we can finish the story??
Whats your thoughts OP?
i would toss 5-10 bucks at a game version of this
but plz OP never stop being imaginative and productive
in the end it's bold content creators like you that build the face of the internet
and do look at Bammes' human anatomy or Loomis... and go to life drawing classes
it would be a real shame if you didn't
I already have a map system for the two dungeons set out with multiple (not many) endings and routs to take. But i was thinking more flash or unity game. Where its text based and you have your "post number" being the damage for the creatures and stuff. I dont know, i'll think about it more.
Ah I'll try.
Oh i've spent years looking at anatomy books and things like that. And I attend figure drawing classes weekly. I chose some pretty odd anatomy for the creatures to fit in with the art style and was focused more on having fun than being correct.
Good stuff man, on the subject of rolling for damage it probably wouldn't be worth making multiple rolls necessary to kill a creature, i'm talking having a creature with 500hp and last 2 digits show damage.
Will only cause a thread to reach limit really quickly.
Perhaps set a creatures hp and say next post linking this determines hit amount, eg creature hp = 60
post number = 42 creature not defeated
Just ideas man, feel free to use or discard as you see fit.