Elves, Dragons, Giants, Slimes, Aliens, Robots, Monsters and anything in between, if you know what I mean.
People especially appreciate it when you give them meaningful feedback and criticism, so make sure to do so. It's easy and both writefags and drawfags will love you for it. Also, try and keep image dumps to a minimum so that more OC can be posted.
Master smut list:
Requests Document Database (feel free to add your requests to this when you post them in the thread!):
This is from a classic sci fi hentai that I always loved. A bit more horror oriented than erotic, but it's pretty lewd too.
It was pruned, no idea why. My theory is that it lacked content, so post some more.
Also, reposting the fic Belgianon wrote last thread.
"SR3: Deep Care"
M. Runner X F. Technomancer, (tomboy/reverse trap, vanilla sex/gentle powerbottoming)
That's about what I figured. I was going to make a thread myself, but I was waiting until I finish the story I'm currently working on. Looks like you already took care of it, though.
Oh, cool. Then I'll try to get around to finishing my prompts.
>Animated Armour/Male adventurer, cum play and affection focus.
>POV of female human Submissive worshiping the body of her Lamia Domme
>Mind-breaking/humiliation/degradation long term slave training.
>sesshomaru raping a Female OC
>avalanche based encasement, possible watersports Herm/female anthro, ice play
>POV piece of male dom and female centaur/lamia sub, Worship Domination, light bondage, Sweaty, possible cum play.
>Lamia town-tour Bathroom-desperation. Friendly, affectionate.
I'd like to see one of the first two or the second from the bottom. Lamia are awesome and practically made for this kind of thing. I've also always had a thing for animated armor. Avalanches scare the shit out of me, though. I hate them nearly as much as I do jellyfish, though jellyfish can at least be sexualized. Avalanches are just terrifying.
Ah, I remember those. Anything you could contribute would be much appreciated.
There's still a metric fuckton of prompts on the google doc, but if you'd like I can add one more. A bit sappy, but it's there.
>you're a priest to a fertility/love goddess; for your dedicated service to her, she allows you the right to have sex with her and impregnate her.
>body worship, breastplay (possibly lactation), and that sort of thing could be worked in easily, but knocking her up should be the most important part of the thing. she is a fertility goddess after all.
oh. oh fuck yes. I am more than ready to do that prompt. I'll start now even, But It may be a day or so before I get anything back to you.
Also, Yeah I'm flipping through the requests now. I'm going to stop this namfagging post spam and get to work, see you my dear /d/edicated readers
As requested, a story about voluntary oviposition.
Tags: MxF, FxF, insect-like aliens, oviposition and insemination, pheromones, large insertion, inflation
As always, I appreciate any feedback or criticism. Next up on my list is paladin orgasm denial. I am open to suggestions for that story or any other requests.
A good read, definitely better than your previous stories in my opinion. The 'bugs loving breasts' thing felt forced and out of place though, and I felt the character descriptions could have been paced a bit better, instead of dumped in a handful of sentences and forgotten for the rest of the story. The aliens could've felt a bit more, well, alien, and fleshed out a little more, as it is they're basically just unusual modes of transport for a pair of cocks that have little to no character.
Overall I liked it, and it's a distinct improvement in skill. Keep it up.
Anybody knows a place where I can find the thread that got pruned? There were some nice draw requests and archive.moe is kill.
I'd be hesitant to do that. we have a large enough split between the porn as is, I'd worry that we'd simply divide and wither.
BUt... It may work out, We could have at least a tester thread.
I don't think your requests have to be eastern or western themed. You can just request stuff, and have eastern pictures. And if nothing else, just post it to the request doc and we'll get around to it and then hopefully post it on the smut masterlist on suptg and you'll have your erotica!
>you'll have your erotica!
Before or after the end of the universe?
Besides, considering the rest of the stuff on the request doc, most of the stuff I'm interested in wouldn't interest any of the people who look on there.
Its weird, for me if the non-human is sentient then there's got to be some kind of good reason as to why they're fucking, but if the non-human isn't sentient, then I don't really mind.
Oooh. Plot twist. The non-human is sentient, but views the human as some sort of lower non-sentient being, and therefore uses it as a toy?
Alternately, the good old...
> "I wonder what it's like to fuck one of those?"
> "I won, and now I'm inexplicably horny."
Hrm. Not sure. The implications trouble me too much for me to get off to it.
Another weird thing; moral ambiguities in these sorts of things disturb me more than straight up "Rar, I am an evil rape monster etc etc". Even though logically the opposite should be true.
well, with moral ambiguity you have the push and pull, the edge of truth and the cloud of self-deception that allows one to go forward with the act. It's unsettling because anyone could civince themselves their doing the right/an okay thing and think they are not in the wrong. some one who is just 'rar evil, gonna rape' is at least full faced in their acceptance of it, even if they don't view themselves/their acts as wrong. they are safly in te extream end of the spectrum so we don't have to compare ourselves to them in any real way....
but I'm just rambling, may be full of shit.
Don't forget your offerings of images to the mods, lest we be again struck from the board.
There's this hentai comic I found on e-hentai ages ago (its a parody of something, though I don't know or care about it), its 29 pages long so I can't be bothered posting it all on here, but I'd really like it if someone would have a stab at writing something for it. If no-one is interested then I'll stick it in the request archive and pray to Bacchus for a miracle.
Begins here; http://g.e-hentai.org/s/11c3689244/391839-1
lemme know if it piques your interest and I'll go into more detail.
Mostly, yeah. Machine sex, mindbreak, milf, them getting knocked up, the whole shebang (heh).
I reckon you could spin it as these two being the wife and daughter of someone who pisses off an evil CEO or something, and this is his way of getting revenge. Like how the "actresses" in JAV are sometimes relatives of people who didn't pay up to the yakuza.
Well, for one thing I've always considered these a smut thread first, fantasy/sci-fi second. If you're determined to keep to that definition though, I suppose you could say that its sci-fi.
I mean, the whole limb-restraint mind-break drugs thing seems like it fits, and as I've said, wouldn't be too hard to fit it into a cuberpunk setting with an evil ceo or scientist or something.
So the mother/daughter thing is part of what you want. That changes my plan slightly, but I think that I may be able to work with that. Machine sex is one of my favorite things, yet I've never actually written it. I had a plan to do so as a sequel to an older story I wrote, but that wouldn't work with what you're asking for. That being said, nothing stops me from doing both.
>>6525605 does have a bit of a point. I also am not a particular fan of the scenario you described, either. I'm sure that the whole thing can be framed in some kind of mad science light, which would fall under sci-fi pretty easily.
Either way, it sounds like something I'd be interested in writing. I'm also working on the paladin orgasm denial story, so no promises on when exactly this gets done. I'll write whichever strikes my fancy sooner.
Alright, that's a lot better than I had expected. Somewhat less enthused about the nebulous deadline though. If it takes too long I might just have to try and write it myself, and that never ends well.
It's not so bad as my language would imply. If I particularly enjoy the prompt and nothing bad happens, I generally finish a story a week. Even if I end up writing the other story first, it should not take more than a few weeks. Given that this is a fresh request, I'll probably end up writing this first. For reference, my current backlog: http://pastebin.com/g52YQ3gv.
I know, I know. I just have a thing about disregarding the narrative and theme outright. The kinks are fine, I've seen way worse. Hell, we've written worse too. (Case in point- all of XS' work.)
He said fapfics, not ERPers. Totally different things here.
In any case, this is the best I could find.
tags: OrcxElf, /ll/ (loli lesbians)
We don't have too much of orcs in general, they just don't seem very popular for whatever reason.
I don't think there is a way to do so now, not like it matters.
Anyone heard from that fellow who did Los Tiberos, the one who was doing the thing with the robot girl on the space station? I was looking forward to it and want to be sure it hasn't been dropped.
Speaking of orcs, I think I got a good one.
Lady paladin is drinking up a storm, as you do, and decides on a drunken whim to forfeit her vows of chastity to the nearest tribe of orcs. In fact, she plans to go full bore and abandon her order's teachings completely and actually sign on with the tribe just to get some deep orcish dickings. She knows she'll probably be pumping out half-orc babies, but who cares, really?
The orcs, savage though they may be, attempt to reason with her and try to make her wait until she's sober enough to make that decision. They succeed...but she still wants some orcs pumping seed into her womb.
Ce la vie.
TL;DR: Pally drunkenly wants to be fucked/bred by orcs and join them. Orcs will only do it if she's sober. They fuck her anyway because she's so damn insistent.
If her vows mean jack and/or shit, she won't be breaking them for shits and giggles.
If the vows don't mean jack and/or shit, there's no point bringing them up.
I'm confused as to what you're after. Are you after wanton sluttery? Corruption? Just impregnation and a gangbang?
I was under the impression that it's covered so much that people are trying to diversify their requests.
Because it's fun.
At least whenever I get around to doing it that is.
That's about it really. Other than I just enjoy writing stuff in general and smut is relatively easy to keep short and not turn into a deluded attempt at writing an epic adventure novel or something like that.
Perhaps you should look at the title of the thread again and notice the part that says "SCI-FI/FANTASY" before asking silly questions like that. If I wanted smut of "real people", I wouldn't be here in the first place.
Partially because it's fun. That, and I know that nobody else will write the story I've got in my head but me.
Also it makes me feel good when I can make something that other people seem to enjoy.
Speaking of which, we should start sharing those ideas. This thread isn't going to make itself hit bump limit before Friday, you know.
elf girls always was a kind of "standard of beauty". Also pointy eared girls are hot.
>The 'bugs loving breasts' thing felt forced and out of place though
It did seem a little odd. More so with there being no real interest in them during the act itself.
>Her other hand reached up, cupping and squeezing the alien breast dangling just above her. To her surprise, the Apocrytan didn't seem to react at all. Apparently her breasts were not nearly so sensitive as a human's.
I was a little surprised that even if the fake tits weren't as sensitive that neither took the opportunity to play with the the human's.
That's my only real criticism.
Oh. Well then keep up the good work.
Does anyone have more pics like this? Specifically normal-sized humans/elves getting gangbanged by smaller humanoid creatures like Goblins or Imps?
Finally got around to reading A Different Knight's Gambit.
Fucking lost it right at the end.
>Perhaps his explanation was a bit inappropriate for eight-year-olds, but it wasn't his fault that their parents hadn't talked with them about voraraphilia and bondage yet.
Okay, so I did a few more revisions to my little ghost story - now featuring actual possession! I took a different approach to the possession this time around, I think. Hopefully it's a little easier to follow what happens and who exactly is saying what, despite them being in the same body.
I'm still not 100% sure how to approach posession. If anyone has a good example of posession done right, I'd love to read it; at the very least some examples of how other people approach describing the matter.
Linky link - http://pastebin.com/Kye50Quw
Current tags: Possession
Future tags: Masturbation, soft vore, ghost sex
I know I'm too late for the spookening, but whatever.
The possession scene itself was pretty good. It looked a lot cleaner since last I looked at it, though it still needs some proofreading. I'm not sure if I can follow the main character's emotional process here, though. She starts out in a panic, which is entirely reasonable. Then she begins to calm down a bit, to the point that she starts asking questions simply out of curiosity. It comes off a little strange considering the depth of her fear earlier, but it's not that big of a deal. Then, spontaneously, she decides to start walking the other way, despite the fact that she was initially only willing to listen because the ghost told her that she was in danger. Her progression here makes no real sense as-written. The transition from the first point to the second could be a bit smoother but is mostly alright. From the second to the third is a huge jump with very little explanation, particularly considering that we're riding in her head enough to hear her monologue. Either cut the third bit entirely or, if this is playing into your story, give her a more reasonable motive.
This was fucking HOT.
Unlike other posters, I don't really care about the breasts one way or the other; humans do weird cosmetic shit that they can't feel things from all the time.
The only things that felt unrealistic to me were:
- the doctor's comment to her at the end; but I totally understand its function in the story and agree with it.
- the idea that they'd let her go home and go about her life if the mating procedure was really that delicate.
But these are just /tg/ sperging quibbles. Honestly it was fantastic and I really enjoyed the premise. Awesome job! Saved to disk.
Personally, I like things with an attractive feminine ...silhouette maybe? not sure if it's the right word, but I like things who's shape hints at things like a humanish form and hips or breasts, whether it be a human woman, xenomorph, dragoness, or whatever, so while I love xeno and female monsters, I don't like the extreme nonhuman
Person being eaten isn't harmed. Swallowed whole and no gore. Sometimes also means the person isn't digested either. Through magic, different biology, science, or just other made up stuff the person isn't harmed from being in a stomach or is spit out.
Sorry guys, tests have been wiping me out so all I could do was dumb monmusu pictures.
Have something that's probably /d/ enough, I'll try seeing if I can get requests done again this weekend.
I haven't drawn porn in so long....
There's this idea for a smutfic I've had knocking around in my head for a few days now (not much more than the basic idea, I'm worried if I put too much thought into it then it'll go out of control again) yet I can't quite seem to push myself to actually start writing it down. I was wondering if anyone had some advice?
That said, its not sci-fi or fantasy based so I'm not sure if I should be asking about it on here.
Well the issue of course was that my knowledge of anatomy is still at a beginner's level, so there's not much else to do but grind. And look at pictures of feet. Not that I'm complaining. Plus assignments are bogging me down, and now I've started an animation project on the side, I don't get much time to contribute here.
In short, yes, but too unskilled to fix up. Here's a little something I was working on for a friend top up the thread.
This initial possession bit is tripping me up something fierce. I have a few ideas on how to fix it, but again, if anyone knows of a good possession story I'd love to read it - get someone else's' take on sexy ghost times. Unfortunately it's not something I've found to be very common.
no no, not ghost vore, ghost sex. Though, if I can figure up something interesting for ghost vore, I might give it a shot.
I'm glad you're enjoying it thus far; and once I get my groove down for this story I hope to finish it rather quickly. I've got a ways to go, but I want to get it done right instead of going back and re-writing bits. Re-writes are the worst.
Soft vore means no chewing or gore during the consumption process. Digestion can still occur (and more than likely will in this story) - so I should probably tag it as soft digestion, or at the very least non-graphic digestion. ie - the digestion will not be detailed or will happen off scene.
To be fair, this story has monster girls and same-size ish vore. I'm not exactly going for realism.
Possession is depressingly rare in smut. Again, though, I thought you did the possession itself pretty well. I think that you need to just slow down her thought process through the scene immediately following. She flips through emotions with staggering speed and it really just doesn't fit.
SFW, Suu For Work!!!
Though Inker, Suu is Lewd by default.
Hi guys, are others /tg/ licences than warhammer okay, namely Confrontation/Rag'narok from late Rackham ? If so, can I ask for sexy times of this girl, with her armor partially removed ? Either receiving both creampy and facial as she ride a dick and blow one or two others, or simply giving a messy titfuck, or else if you feel it better ?
Don't pay attention to the hips, sculptor fail...
Sure, other /tg/ licenses besides warhammer are ok.
Getting someone to do it might be the hard part, though- we're woefully low on contributors as it is and I don't think many of them know what Confrontation might be.
I've decided to start writing mini-stories for this thread, based on ideas or pictures presented within. First out I've written about two pictures.
Treacherous Woods https://docs.google.com/document/d/1zNQKCVXZ5797hCBiHtvQMllKlMAMmkZ_pTUtsowE4JQ/edit?usp=sharing
~ 550 words.
Revenge of the Pigmen https://docs.google.com/document/d/1amNGSkyblAw8JmWL5wan3xIrA335JFcY48VacZ5Kn3Y/edit?usp=sharing
~ 1300 words.
I'd like to apologize for my English in advance, I've run the stories through spellcheck but there might be some odd sentences or miss typed words left. Any and all ideas, criticism or other feedback or opinions are welcome. I got a thick skin to have at me!
I was going to try and do something similar to that the other day, write a mini-smutfic for all the pics in my porn folder. Still trying to work up the motivation to do it. Or to write anything for that matter.
Anyone want to critique my work?
It's about an initiate of a fertility goddess, performing the last rites to a prisoner facing the noose.
Contains snuff and impregnation
Don't quite have the time to review it thoroughly, but technically it isn't snuff since the death itself isn't part of any sexual activity. The sex itself is a bit on the scanty side, but in this case it does make sense since it's literally just a few minutes before the guy's execution. One has to wonder what kind of society thinks that kind of thing is normal.
Might be wise to add the "exhibitionism" tag, since it's implied the whole thing happens in front of a crowd of onlookers.
Another mini for those who feel like fapping. A Bump in the Road: https://docs.google.com/document/d/1XAVEAqEFpQeTzqLOGHbJp4fwuEjLWoM8-iLqAh5kJZ8/edit?usp=sharing
Sort of off topic, since this isn't really a request, but you know what I wanna see? An NTR doujin where the guy takes his girlfriend back.
>MC is an innocent, friendly guy, wouldn't hurt a fly
>Mr. Steal Yo Gurl comes along and steals MC's gurl
>keeps her chained to a bed for a week while fucking her brains out and brainwashing her into his mindless fuckpuppet
>MC arrives in chains himself, and the villain challenges him to sexually satisfy his GF
>heart sinks when he realizes he can't
>"I'm so sorry, Anon... I love you, but I love this man's cock more! I'm his now... goodbye, Anon..."
>MC kicked out and sent home
>MC vows to get his GF back, by force if he must
>hero has to not only become strong enough to defeat his rival, but to satisfy his GF as well
>unlocks a sadistic streak within himself just as the rival unlocked a masochistic streak within his GF
>he wins and takes his bitch back, and then they go home and the indulge in their newfound proclivities with mind-blowing sadomasochistic sex
Definitely not the most progressive thing ever, and it might even defeat the entire point of NTR, but man would it be hot.
>wife is fucked by big dick trap and becomes addicted
>husband finds out
>this page happens
>he now has his wife and the trap has his bitches
I'd like to request two potential stories
1. Straight human males are abducted en masse by alien studs to be converted into gay sex slaves and forced to fuck the asses in a galactic culture where being the receiver in sex is seen as preferable due to the lack of work involved.
2. A shemale adventurer combats either a witch or wizard (gender not important) and fails. The magician then proceeds to cast a spell on the shemale that magically and permanently removes the mouth from her face, leaving nothing but skin where the hole used to be, and proceeds to humiliate her by publicly exhibiting her in revealing clothing as their dickgirl property.
ok, I'll make it more specific.
An IG unit is working with a Sororitas unit to hold a place from tyranids. They intend to send out a patrol of Sisters conduct recon, with a psyker to provide some support. The psyker provides some advice for dealing with the aliens, but the Sisters disregard him because he is a 'witch'. Unfortunately, most of squad is captured, leaving the psyker and one sister to figure out a way to rescue them. After being freed from the tentacles of the alien, the squad see fit to 'reward' the witch for helping them escape.
Yeah, not quite my thing, I'm open to other things though
Not really familiar enough with 40K to write something like that
Also I tend to be more interested in more /d/ish and fantasy related ideas
I think that we just got more requests on /tg/. I remember there being innumerable shitty requests, even as much as a year ago. We just never really paid attention to them and only remember the good ones that ended up being written. We don't have the volume here to produce really good requests yet.
>I remember there being innumerable shitty requests
We had a lot of unpicked up requests but I don't remember much shitty ones, though my tastes are fairly out there and varied so I may just have lower standards
[spoiler]Also I think about half of them were mine[/spoiler][spoiler][spoiler]No /d/ spoilers[/spoiler][/spoiler]
I don't necessarily mean requests for shitty material. For every well thought-out request, there were dozens of "how about an x fucking a y but with z" requests. I never mind any sexual content in requests, I just find it slightly annoying to deal with anything that vague. It's hard-enough to write smut regularly and in good quantity without having to worry about starting a story entirely from scratch. If you want a particular fetish catered to, at least propose some kind of believable situation for it to take place in.
Yes, that is generally correct, but I've rarely spent much time in the database. I tend to read and pick up requests straight from the thread, as fresh ones generally attract the most interest and the OR is practically guaranteed to still be around. I haven't paid much attention to the change in request quality in the database, but the overall quality of requests is about the same as it ever has been. The quantity has just decreased sharply. It seems as though we have much fewer members carrying on disproportionately more conversation. That does make sense, though, as the people who found their way here are probably the ones most active in /wst/ back in our /tg/ days.
The split really didn't help, but I don't think we have any particular reason to be concerned. We've got a decent number of new faces and and some of the old guys, as well as a few people who are coming back from a long absence. We seem to have a much better on-topic percentage now than we ever did on /tg/. My only real complaint is that we've fallen a quite a bit on finished story throughput. I don't mind having bunches of WiPs, but I'd like to see more stories being finished. In time, I'm sure things will stabilize. The board as a whole is starting to become aware of our presence, and the erotic literature thread about a month ago actually did us a lot of good. We managed to shuffle a bunch of scattered writers all into one place.
Really, if I have one thing to complain about, it's that we weren't given a chance to form a consensus before we were banned. Even if we would have still lost a lot of people with the move, it would have been nice to know that we actually lost them and not that they think we disappeared for good. Honestly, it surprises me how often we still get people just finding us now. I was always under the assumption that damn near all of us were /tg/+/d/ crossboarders. Apparently, I was wrong.
Another latecomer? Join the crowd.
Long story short, shitposters shitposted, started dozens of fake threads, and the mods just started pruning both the troll threads and the real threads. Nobody had a choice in the matter, and here we are today. On teh one hand, we're much better at being on topic now and shitposting has stopped, but on the other hand discussion in general has slowed to a crawl (with the /d/-/aco/ split not helping).
So many people ask this question now that perhaps I may as well can the answer on pastebin for future reference.
Good news, we weren't technically banned
Bad news, trolls got the mods so assmad they made a habit of wiping any thread remotely related to /wst/ to stop the trolling
I say wait a few months and see if we can pull a /qtg/
We really should just add an extra post after the OP for this kind of thing. "Yes, this is the /wst/ from /tg/. We were kicked off by trolls. No, you shouldn't try to make a thread over there again. Really. Yes, you may post here, stop asking. Yes, you may post WiPs here and ask for help. Yes, you can make requests, that's about 80% of the reason why we have threads at all." I kinda like the pile of WiPs and new authors we've been getting, but all of the people asking for permission to post things gets annoying. This is an anonymous board. What are we going to do to stop you? We obviously couldn't stop the trolls, how or why would we stop you from posting content?
>I don't know how the anatomy is supposed to look.
Okay, yes, that is bad, individual parts are okay but perspective and anatomy is all whack, from the ass down is mostly fine, left knee is a bit too narrow though, head is turned too far around and the neck is a bit too long, shoulder should be blocking her chin some, chest though, chest is all fucked up, too small, skin bunches up too much, and only way it could be that narrow from the waist is if she was missing half her ribs
But again, most of her parts are fine, there's potential.
I'd suggest looking at a few anatomy references to see how the body comes together, sketch out a few other poses and compare them to see if they all look correctly proportional and see what you need to work on
I'm definitely not an artist, but this guy>>6538105
is pretty much exactly right. Draw almost exclusively off of references for a while or take a good, long look through some anatomy books. It looks like you're an ass man who drew everything up to the hips and then suddenly remembered that women have a top half. Also, that head is fucking terrifying. Hair looks nice, though.
No, I now have a new Suu for Safe For Work boards!
The Original Request: Pregnant runaway princess cuddling up with her orc hubby post-coitus, and orc husbando can't help but give her belly rubs and light kisses up and down the curve of her stomach...
If the writer wants to throw in some cute pillow-talk before and during the belly-worship, I wouldn't mind in the slightest.
The Result: https://docs.google.com/document/d/1ycWUl0O5uB9kEENIvCXTpjeTYSXra1bOG5hAXm0Fy-A/edit?usp=sharing
~ 800 words
>can't post this on /tg/ because muh magical realm
I recently put a lot of thought into this and sort of included my magical realm into a larger campaign of D&D. The players are scouring through a broken empire, now scattered into kingdoms.
One nobleman from the collapsed kingdom, pissy about the fact that he was screwed out of everything, pours all his remaining forces into capturing the last Emperor, who happens to be a 19 year old kid, too young to be smart enough to manage a continent spanning empire.
Nobleman doesn't give a fuck, in good with a ton of mages, who help him build his own demi-plan, which he rules as a petty god. The young ex-emperor is dragged into it, beaten within an inch of his life, and has his body spliced into that of a demon of excess/lust, to the point that the only recognizable part of him is his head protruding between two demonic heads.
The demon has control of his body, he can only move from the neck up,
So, now that his new form is established, the noble toys around with him for a bit, before just tossing him down into the lowest layer of the plane, where the demon controlling his body essentially forces him to do as many degrading things as possible, every moment of every day, while the demon itself is preserving his sense of pride so that he exists in a constant and eternal state of sexual torture/barely resisting corruption, the demon feeds on his despaire.
Every time the guy passes out, the demon absorbs his memories, and the next day, forces him into even more degrading acts, in every sort of fetish imaginable, ensuring that it never gets old to the guy.
I think this seems a little too hardcore though. I'd hope a good story overwrites my blatant fetishism, but hey, I may just save it for an ERP profile
You'd probably be fine to just omit some details. You don't really need to go into what the demon is doing or what kind of demon it is. Without that, what you have really just sounds like a demon tormenting someone and debasing them.
That's true at least. Thinking about things like that, I just tend to get detailed with how I'd like it to be. Oh well, I'll at least use a much more skimmed down version for the game proper, full description is getting an F-list!
That's more like it. To be honest, almost all of my stories are just lewd versions of things that have happened in games. I also pull dialogue from games if I find it particularly amusing. Astoundingly, I generally manage to keep the flow in one direction. My players don't know that I'm a hopeless pervert. Mostly.