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>You take your kikimora and bend her over the table she's currently dusting, you then take her roughly from behind
>You lift up her thick, frilly skirt, rip off her panties, and tear off her garter belt
>You start pounding away at her unused pink slit, thoroughly wet as if responding to you
>"M-M-MASTER!!!~" She gasps, surprised and aroused
>You stick two fingers in her mouth which she sucks and bites as she moans
>You finish inside and leave her sweaty, disheveled, and sprawled out on the ground
>She's panting and looking at you lovingly
>You return her gaze, affecting a certain coldness
>You straighten your tie "your services are no longer needed, you're fired."
>She looks at you, absolutely crushed
>"M-Master... but..." she stifles tears
>You offer her your hand "It wouldn't make sense for my wife to work as a maid, right?"
>Her tears of sadness turn to tears of joy "MASTER!! MASTER!!!" she kisses you all over as her feathery tail swishes back and forth
Would you fight through hell for a chance at some of that demon pussy?
I know I would.
What even is this, anyway? How old is she? She look like a very flat 18 yr old or something, like she jut kept growing but puberty never hit, did she hit it before it could hit her or something?
Fucking dammit, I need to stop writing when we're about to change threads.
>Finally, you lean back to admire your handiwork
>There she is, all tied up.
>Her wrists and elbows are drawn tightly together, her chest harness is squeezing her little white boobs into flat, adorable cones again, and the whole package is neatly wrapped up with the last rope around her arms, back, and belly
>She makes an adorable slurping noise as she sucks at the drool that has collected in the hollow hard tube of her bit gag
>What? Oh, you discovered the surprise?"
>You grin devilishly at her
>The little Shirohebi splutters and grunts through the tight gag, desperate to spit out whatever she had just swallowed
>"Oh, relax. It's just a little slice of lemon in there. It's sour though, right?"
>It's a little hard to take her anger and surprise seriously when she's all gagged and blushing and drooling like that, but you do your best to not let it show
>"Are you going to be okay, Saki?"
>You are being completely serious now.
>"That's my good girl!"
>You switch immediately back to your usual happy, carefree attitude and give the little, tied-up snake a headpat
>"I think it's really cute when you drool. You're going to think hard about whether you want me to watch you do something so embarrassing or if you want to taste that sour lemon all the time. I'm sure you can handle it though, right?"
>She nods, but still gives you a dirty look
>Sure it might have been mean to trick her like that, but you wouldn't have done it if you didn't think she could deal with it
>"I hope you like swings, Saki, because this next part might be a little scary at first."
>She looks at you curiously and mumbles through her gag
>You ignore her for now, instead you choose to pick up one end of the longer rope hanging from the second ceiling hook and start to wrap it around the young Shirohebi's hips
>Once the coil is your desired thickness, you loop the end of the rope around the coil and tie it off
>Now, if you wanted, you could hoist Saki into the air by her hips if you pulled on the other end of the rope
>That would be a little too mean though, you have to make sure the rest of her is adequately supported
>Scooting around to the priestess-in-training's other side, you fasten the other hook-rope to her chest harness in several places
>"There we go! Finally ready! Are you ready for me to pull you up, Saki?"
>She is looking a little more nervous now, but she is still agreeable
>"Good girl! Here we go..."
>Taking the end of each rope in a different hand, you stand up and slowly start to pull
>Saki tries to 'awawa' through her bit gag, but the result is severely muffled
>Long, silvery strands of drool hang from her mouth and she thrashes a bit as you pull her higher and higher off the ground
>Eventually, she is laying in the air at around the height of your hips; her scaly white tail dangles down and trails on the floor for a few inches, and her short, bobbed hair slightly obscures her round, cute face
>You put one rope in between your teeth, now able to tie off the other one on Saki's chest harness
>Once it is secure, you tie the other one off on itself, right next to the first loop you made with it on her hip coils
>"Now then, let's see what you've got going on back here?"
>You direct your attention to that small, deliciously firm white butt with a grin on your face and a gleam in your eye
>Someone said they missed me last thread
I've been letting my one fan down. It's time to
just do it.
She already is mine
I want to use brown Fairies as onaholes.
>Do you have a ring?
What would you do with Miia if she was real?
I would work a hard working man's job to provide for her
Would you and her have any friends or just keep to yourselves?
We would have friends but we would spend most of our time with each other
Darling is a self insert anon, He is me and i am him, it's why all the girls have a pet name for him and his name has been said like twice the entire series.
>I would work a hard working man's job to provide for her
So you'd like for her to be a housewife? That sounds nice. How would you like to come home after a hard day's work?
>We would have friends but we would spend most of our time with each other
What kind of friends? Polt, Cera, etc.? Other Monster Girls or just human people you know? Or maybe other couples so no ones jealous. Building on that, what kind of activities would you and Miia do together for fun? And how would you two deal with >>14327581 an alp infestation, I swear they're everywhere these days. I've had to sweep several off my damn porch just today.
I like hearing people talk about their dreams and lives with their waifu. It gives me hope and strength.
My fetish is to repeatedly prematurely ejaculate to the awkward sex acts of a fujo Cyclops.
She wraps her fingers around my shaft? Boom, jizz all over her hands. Her lips touch my head? Boom, jizz right in her mouth. Footjobs, armpits, hairjobs, even just her exaggeratedly calm breath on my dick and I'd shoot it out. She'd tape it of course and brag to her internet friends what a sex goddess she is, when it's really just me being an ultra quickshot.
What character he has is "Guy I'd be" or "Guy I'd want to be"
I mean who wouldn't want to take a cute snake to an aquarium date? I'll tell you who.
People who want to take a cute snake's mom on an aquarium date.
See pic related for my artistic inspiration.
>Before you know it, you are standing right behind Saki, staring down at her little white orbs of flesh as they glisten softly with the faintest hint of sweat
>The long, pink, oval-shaped bead nestled between them, right over her anus calls out to you
>It is exactly like the one you admired the first time you put a plug in her butt, but this plug is not that plug
>This plug is a good deal bigger.
>"Let's see here..."
>Saki cranes her head around to watch you, still unable to control her drooling
>You grasp the base of her butt plug firmly and pull.
>Saki moans throatily through her bit gag as the fat plug slides out of her tight little pucker with a quiet pop
>This plug is an inch wide at its widest and two and a half inches long.
>"Feeling good already? If not, you're definitely about to..."
>Her eyes flutter as she lets out a deep sigh; over these past few days off she has gotten very used to pleasure and to your teasing
>You can tell she craves it.
>"Oh shit, I almost forgot!"
>You set the plug down carefully on Saki's back before hastily jogging to your dresser for your bottle of lube
>"Can't forget this now, can we?"
>Saki shakes her head in agreement, and you pause in front of her, bending down to kiss her lovingly on the forehead and give her a headpat
>Now back behind your little Shirohebi captive, you carefully line yourself up and pop open the lube
>Saki can't see what you are doing very well at all; she squirms around in frustration and cranes her head anxiously to try and catch some sight of you
>You hear her slurp at her drool and then whine pitifully as she forgets that there's still a lemon hidden in her tight, restrictive bit gag
>"Oh no, did you get the sour again? I'm sorry..."
>No you're not.
>Finally, you direct your attention to your throbbing erection
>It hovers millimeters from Saki's beautiful little ass, just waiting for you to bury it inside
>You squirt out a very generous line of lube all the way down your rod, wincing a little at how cold the clear, slippery stuff is
>Before it has a chance to drip around or slide off, you grab it and start working it around with your right hand, quickly coating yourself in the viscous liquid
>Once you are ready to begin, you cap the lube again and toss it gently to the floor; thankfully it doesn't burst open
>Your heart falls as you realize there's nothing around to wipe your hand off on, but you are too impatient to delay this any longer
>With your clean hand, you firmly grip Saki's left butt cheek and touch your glistening tip to her pucker
>You can feel it winking erratically beneath you as Saki trembles with desperation and anticipation, there is no doubt in your mind that she is ready for you
>"Here I go Saki. I hope you enjoy the first time with me in your butt."
>With that, you thrust.
>Saki groans through her lemon gag as your tip enters her tight, dark depths
>Without thinking, you instinctively grasp her right butt cheek with your lube-covered hand
>Wait a second.
>You've just had the most brilliant idea!
>With your tip still buried in the little Shirohebi's anus, you rub your hands together, equalizing the amount of lube on them
>Sure it's not oil, but it's close enough.
>You massage both hands into her small, firm globes of perfect white, roughly coating them with a shiny film of lube
>You thrust into her, but you only slide in a little further
>The rest of your momentum is diverted into making Saki swing forward
>She flails around a little bit in surprise as she lurches forward
>"Sorry, Saki. Let me think here for a bit..."
>Like she could do anything but wait when she's gagged and tied up and hanging like this
>You try to think fast before the situation gets too awkward, and an idea finally comes to you
>You put your hands on her hips for a little more stability, but you keep your slippery thumbs firmly planted in the middle of each of her butt cheeks
>Good thing you have large hands.
Dayum that's lewd.
When you think about it, it's actually rather impressive that he's got high enough production capacity to fire off rapidly and repeatedly like that.
I won't be a loser anymore after I cum inside her! Granted, I might cum from her kiss, her hand guiding me, her labia, and her hymen on the way, but eventually I'm going to be inside!
Then her pubes are going to get all cumsoaked and disgusting when I keep jizzing from humping her labia. I'll slide along them, I'll prod at her hole, I'll even cum into her urethra. Eventually she'll let me do it.
>And how would you two deal with >>14327581 an alp infestation, I swear they're everywhere these days. I've had to sweep several off my damn porch just today.
Did you feed them or pet them? Even a compliment is all it takes. They'll never leave.
I have this old one when i got this artbook
>How would you like to come home after a hard day's work?
I want to come home covered with sweat and dirt, tired but happy to see my snek family, and then i want to shower and put on comfy clean pajamas and cuddle with them all on our couch while watching a something comfy
>What kind of friends?
Well, i have a couple of friends already, and she would probably have some friends herself, my friends aren't very flirty and Miia isn't the type to flirt with someone she doesn't love so i don't think i would have a jealousy problem. I'm the same as Miia, but she's borderline yandere so she would still probably get jealous, but i would do my best to comfort her because i just think that's cute.
>what kind of activities would you and Miia do together for fun?
Miia would like going on dates a lot, but i get nervous around big crowds, so i think a lot of walks in parks or going to a nice quiet restaurant during off hours.
It would also be fun to try an teach her how to cook
And to cuddle and read books together
>And how would you two deal with >>14327581 an alp infestation
Bullying and teasing has always worked well for me, sometimes you get a tough one that you have to call cute a bunch of times but she'll run off blushing really hard after a few minutes of that
>I like hearing people talk about their dreams and lives with their waifu. It gives me hope and strength.
Do you have a waifu anon?
I've never kissed an Alp, though. Is she gonna cosplay as one and film us making out? Nobody's gonna be fooled by a pair of fake bieye glasses, anon. Besides, if she did, she'd expose herself as a fraud when I cum buckets from the hugs and kisses of this so-called Alp.
she has to give me her express written consent int he form of a love letter first!!!
>Now that you have more control, you gently pull the bound, hanging little snakegirl all the way onto your throbbing girth
>As you pull, you firmly knead your thumbs into her soft, delicious white ass
>"You liked that, didn't you Saki? I'm all the way in you now. How does it feel?"
>"Good? Good. Your little butt is all mine like this, you know?"
>"Here, how does it feel when I slide out?"
>"Yeah. And what about when I start thrusting?"
>"Mmmm! Mmmmm! Mmmm!"
>Saki bites down hard on her bit gag, stretching her slender little neck and lifting her head up in desperation as you start to fuck her tight, pulsating anus
>"It feels hot, doesn't it Saki? Having me in you like this doesn't feel like the plugs did at all, hmmm?"
>As your pace quickens it gets harder and harder to maintain your calm, brutally teasing tone
>"...It feels hot for me too. Your insides are squeezing me so hard, it feels really good!"
>The helpless Shirohebi tries to call out to you through her restrictive black gag; her tail thrashes restlessly beneath her as your hips smack into her shiny white, lube-covered butt again and again
>"You're going to be filled up back here soon, Saki. I... can feel it coming, you're being such a good girl!"
>Your thoughts keep running away from you and it gets harder and harder to think of coherent ways to tease the little white snake so you stop talking and focus everything on your movements
>The way your thick girth slides so easily into such a tight-feeling hole is incredibly hypnotizing
>You can feel every curve, every contour of her insides; they clench and squeeze at you as if they're desperate to have your reward
>Saki grunts and moans deeply as beautiful, intense pleasure completely overwhelms her; although her erotic noises are muffled by her gag they are still very loud.
>It doesn't take much longer for your burning, boiling seed to shoot forth, expanding and swelling inside Saki's belly as jet after jet of creamy cum explodes out of you
>This is it.
>It feels like all six years of tension and anger and frustration are being forcefully expelled from your body as sweet blissful pleasure takes its place
>For awhile you just stand there, fully embedded inside the little Shirohebi, feeling her anus pulse at you occasionally as your load sloshes in her belly
>Saki herself has gone limp; you aren't sure if she has orgasmed herself, but her eyes are half lidded and you are sure she is smiling behind her gag
>Drool completely covers her mouth, chin and neck and her hair is a mess, but she looks completely relaxed
>Maybe she fainted?
>Maybe she's just overloaded and went into a trance or something.
>Whatever, you're sure she'd like to find herself in your arms when she wakes up
>You slowly slide yourself out of her and bend down to inspect your work
>Her little pucker gapes open a little, and you can see a bead of cum start to trickle out and down her tail
>Before any more has a chance to leak out, you grab her plug from the floor and slowly re-insert it
>Now her belly will stay all nice and full and warm.
>You carefully let her down from the ceiling, but you are far too tired to untie her further
>You do make sure to take her bit gag out though, she was a good sport with the lemon and you don't want to push her too far on her first time with it
>Stifling a yawn, you gently pick the naked, still-tied priestess-in-training up and tenderly carry her over to your bed
>It's almost noon, but you feel a nap is definitely in order
>Saki doesn't seem to be waking up soon anyway
>You'd rather have her wake up when she's 'making spoons' with you anyway, you know how much she enjoys that
>If you can bring yourself to stop giving her headpats, maybe you'll be able to sleep as well.
That's all for today, I think there's just one more session left in this one. Just gotta wrap things up. Then, it's on to other things. Thanks for reading!
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>I wish my Oomukade onee-san would wear clothes.
You know she'll never do it.
But then the Alp will be in love with me. She's going to let me inside her and gasp with pleasure every time I shoot another load into her brand-new womb. My mistress is going to have a tough time bullying me when there's a free hole right there.
She can make me cum until I'm too drained to play with Mistress. She'd have to take me to a Mindflayer to make me only cum from her touch, and that's be like saying she loves me. She can't do that!
>Monoeye keeps the Alp around because her succubutt powers remove your refractory period and keep you going even though you come on a hair trigger
Poor Alp is there for a reason, even if she's just being used.
I just want a slightly chubby Miia Christmas Cake to marry
I want to bully a monoeye with my dick.
And by that I mean stop thrusting when she's about to cum and just hug her and breathe in her ear until she's far away from the edge to continue.
It's our wedding night and her first time, so I'll edge her for hours until she ahegao's. Once she's almost reduced into a mindbroken, drooling wreck, I'll finally kiss her and cum inside her, finally driving her over the edge so hard that she passes out from the orgasm. She's gonna be so sore the next morning, though. I'll have to bring her breakfast in bed.
If you're a good person i wouldn't mind eventually marrying off my daughter to someone who she likes that will take care of her
I want to milk a holstaurus!
I want her to try and milk me back!
I want her to rip off my underwear in a lust crazed excitement!
I want her to collapse into fits of laughter over my tiny dick!
This also. He's sort of becoming the alp of greentexts, where stories just get churned out instead of being carefully constructed.
I think if he took his time Quicksilver could write some amazing shit
You've brought it upon yourself
VN guy here. I've spent the last little while planning out the routes and devising key events along each one, along with some sample lines for your perousal. I've decided to go with a different sort of route structure form most, and I've included a secondary document with samples of some of the major events, lines as well as details on general narrative structure here.
The original wall of text containing project details and character outlines is here, now with characters from the first draft added back in for your consideration. I'm trying to decide on who will be the sixth route, and I'd love to hear your input or ideas for characters.
I've decided on a name for the protagonist and confirmed the setting, as writing is going along well. I've begun writing several routes independent of each other, as there is no planned overlap between them, and right now I am focused on making organic, believable introductions for all of the characters.
I'll answer what questions I can when I return later today. Thank you for your interest, patience and feedback.
Still irrelevant. If they do, your eighteen foot monter will become tiny, so it's not like it's an issue. The matter of 'too big' and 'too small' is erased in favor of the state of 'always right'.
I never expected this. I mean, I know stuff can go on for awhile, but I have a lot of ideas I want to fit in. I try to be as detailed as possible, but that usually means I get distracted a lot. I'll remember this.
Greentexts are really just my rough drafts, a bunch of ideas I dump out in a few hours. I usually put a lot of time into editing before I move to the next story, but I'll definitely keep this in mind.
Would you rather I not greentext as much and just post the finished product/installments? That's what's going to happen with my next story anyway, minus the posting in here for reasons. I guess we'll se how that goes.
Not them, but if it's staleness, something I noticed and, correct me if I'm wrong, all your settings seem to be mundane normal modern life, just with MGs involved. Try go a etting completely different? future sci-fi? Fantasy? Industrial era magi-steam punk?
>reading up on stalkers and obsessive lovers to write yandere stuff
>it turns out there's some seriously scary shit
>for instance, some people get so obsessed with their love interest they decide they want to BE them
>and decide to kill off the "impostor" so they can live out their dream of being that person
Real life yandere is terrifying.
Could make for an interesting story I guess
>The matter of 'too big' and 'too small' is erased in favor of the state of 'always right'.
I remember a story where a childhood friend oni was already huge as a loli and fucked her shota neighbor. Then afterwards they went
>Oh my god, that was so good, it was so gentle
>Fuck my life, she said I have a tiny dick
>You take Verina back to the forest on your next day off to apologize to the plant girl she Assault and Battery'd.
>You find the Alraune right where you left her, of course.
>She's sitting on a new giant flower, though 'giant' may not be the right word - it's barely large enough to support her butt.
>She's hugging her legs, with her knees up under her chin.
>Her face turns sour as soon as she sees you and Verina.
>When you say you're there to apologize she huffs and wobbles around on her flower to sit with her back turned to you.
>Fortunately, you brought bribes.
>You show off the 10 pound bags of fertilizer and try to get her interested.
>She wants Verina's legs too, but you manage to talk her down to a happy meal toy you found on the trail.
>Disney princess that does karate chops for some reason.
>She loves it.
>For some reason.
>With your conscience clear you take Verina and head back toward the car.
>You change your mind halfway there though; you're already here, you might as well go for a hike.
>A real hike, not a felony disguised as one.
>When you reach the trailhead you stop to examine the signs and pick a path.
>"Anon, this sign has threatening silhouettes on it." She's frowning at a wildlife warning.
>"Ah, that's just normal stuff. It's not like we'll actually run into anything."
>"It says there are venomous snakes here. Do you know first aid for snake bites, Anon?"
>"Sure," you lie. "You just suck out the poison, right?"
>"What? No, that's an urban le-"
>"It'll be alright, it's almost winter already, there won't be any snakes out." You pick out a beginner trail that leads to the crest of a nearby hill. "Come on, let's take this one."
That is the general setting, yes. I haven't thought about doing a different one in awhile, but that could be why I was feeling a little stuck earlier on. I feel like any fantasy I do will turn into a gary-stu self-insert fuckfest, but it's something I may want to work on at some point.
>I feel like any fantasy I do will turn into a gary-stu self-insert fuckfest
Maybe you've just gotta jump for it, and make the most cringe inducing gary stu ever. get it out of your system, then work a bit more realism into it from there. I mean, I dunno, I've been told I'm bad at advice.
5 characters with routes and 5 draft characters?
Even professional big shot VN companies usually keep it 3-4 routes at max and you want to make 5? Unless you want to make them ultra short and kinetic (like 15 min each with no choices) it's not going to work.
I have little hope for anon's project in the first place but this is too much for one guy. If you really want to do something you should probably do VN with 1 girl for starters. If you managed to finish it then next with 2 girls etc etc
What length are you planning for each route?
It seems like every writefag has a weird perversion, whether it's futa, incest, CBT... Funny that. I wonder if everyone has a thing like that and most people just don't manifest it, or if writefagging just draws in depraved people.
Eh, every one probably has a lot of weird perversions, most of which never see the light of day in these threads for fear of the backlash I bet you only see the tip of the iceberg with most people.
I'm sorry anon, I can't say. It's like the two anons right above you say, it's a can of worms I really don't want to open. If you REALLY must know, check my pastebin once I get back here with a new story.
>20 minutes into the hike Verina stops dead in the middle of the trail.
>"What's up?" you ask.
>No response. She's just staring off into space.
>You clap your hands together in front of her face to get her attention.
>She gives a little jump. "W-what? Anon? What is it?"
>"What do you mean, 'what is it?'. You froze up."
>"Ah. I'm sorry, I was just...something just occurred to me. It's not important. Come, let's continue."
>You resume your hike, but it doesn't last long before she stops again.
>"Anon, um, could you wait here a moment? I need to step aside to take care of something."
>"...Explain what, exactly."
>"Well, if you must know, I need to use the ladies' room."
>"Oh." You relax. "Okay, go ahead, I'll wait. Wait, we just passed a rest station like 5 minutes ago-"
>"I'll just be a moment!" She yells as she darts off into the woods.
>You sigh and find a rock to sit on.
>Suddenly you hear a scream.
>You run off in the direction she went, calling her.
>You find her sitting with her back against a tree in a little sheltered depression out of sight of the trail. Her face is so flushed it looks purple instead of blue.
>"Anon! I've been b-bitten! By a snake!"
>"What!? Did you see what kind it was? Where did it bite you? Let me see it!"
>"Yes, of course, let you see it. Just a moment." She takes a deep breath.
>Then, with jerky motions. she pulls down her pants and panties, fully exposing herself to you.
>She uses her hands to spread her labia and points out two small abrasions on the inside of it.
>"T-there, see? Snakebite."
>It could be a snakebite. It could also be the result of her poking at it with her fingernail for a few seconds, but you never know.
>"You'll, um, h-have to suck out the poison."
That's your fault for being a pedo. Fags can consent, a pedo can literally never have consensual sex. Not until they create androids that look like children anyway. I mean, if you still wanna jerk it to children because of that, that's your choise, but you chose to never actually be able to touch one without consequences.
Why do you think kids can't consent?
Anyway, fucking kids has been okay far longer than it's been banned. It's gonna come back too when Islam wins. I'm already circumcised so I can just turn at the right moment and get to fuck a little brown girl.
I think the issue is that people mistake power for stue-ness. It's all about perspective. some times there's a reason for all that power, sometimes a character is just a big fish in a small pond, and there are behemoths out there in oceans that dwarf the perceived sue entirely.
You're mistaking pedohpilia now to what it was back when. Fucking kids has never been okay, but back in the day, people over around 13 weren't considered kids either. And 40 was ancient.
>I thought the moose saga characters where OK. I dont get what the problem is.
They can take on whole armies alone with little problem. There may as well be no villains because there's nothing the Order can do to even slow them down. Not even one member of the harem is an average monstergirl, they're all unbeatable super soldiers.
>Not until they create androids that look like children anyway.
We live in a world where drawn children have been legally ruled as having more rights than the guys that fap to them. You don't think that'd extend to androids too?
In the first place, the whole "Pedo Hunt" thing is, historically speaking, a fairly recent development; and not even all that wide-spread in the grand scope of the Earth. Of course, there is a valid reason for its existence in the first place, wanting to keep children safe, mentally and physically as they develop. Of course, this ignores the possibility of variances in the rates of children developing, but people who are actually sexually mature at a young age are an extreme minority, and it's far better to err on the side of caution with things like Age of Consent laws. More worrisome is that it's just a part of the larger moral guardians mindset which, rather than protecting developing individuals, leads to coddling them and in fact stunting their development.
But I'm rambling. End point, maybe one day we'll figure out a better way to structure our society than just saying "X years has passed, you can do shit now". Or maybe we'll just wind up like the world of Shimoneta.
I don't see how she's a sue. She actually gets her ass kicked repeatedly in the intro.
Moose's characters have never lost and never will, that's the problem with it. They bounce from place to place stomping everything with no consequences for themselves.
Being able to conceive doesn't mean you should. Being able to do many things doesn't mean you should do them, either, nor does it mean it's beneficial to do it. Keep your filthy hands away from the developing children, pedo-san.
half tempted to write a story in a far-future sci fi setting now but I feel like the high tech stuff would quickly overshadow or be overshadowed by monstergirls.
That's why people stick to contemporary and high fantasy, I guess.
though, I could write about an explorer from a high-tech scifi setting stumbling onto a planet full of monstergirls in a high-medieval or Bronze Age setting... That has potential.
A random anon on the internet? I can trust you unequivocally. I'm sure you won't act as her savior and liberate her from her prisons for some 'adult games' or anything like that too!
>I'm sure you won't act as her savior and liberate her from her prison
>Pinning down and entering a child who doesn't understand what is going on or why it hurts is 'liberation'
I can only picture you as one of those cunty worms that turn up in manga every now and then and hide behind things while they stir shit with that 'shi shi shi' laugh.
Everything sounds good, and I'm assuming you realize how much work it actually is
The characters borderline seem like stereotypes patched onto MGs but I'm sure that this won't be an issue once the full thing is actually released and they have plenty of text depicting them in details
Anyway good luck with this, you're gonna need it
>monster girl of any age
>not knowing about sex
Eh, we're not really talking about KC's attempts to justify his own pedophilia, more the act in general. Having to hamfist clauses in to make it okay in your own setting is your liberty as a writer, but don't expect any one else to bite the bait.
Guys, seriously. How do you get the oil out of the mofu?
I want to do lewd things with a White Rabbit! This one, to be specific!
>You might not know jack about first aid but you know sucking out the poison doesn't actually work.
>It's also pretty clear that those little marks aren't a snakebite.
>These are the things you should be thinking, or perhaps saying, but mostly you're just thinking 'Vagina'.
>She is showing you her vagina.
>She is spreading it open right in front of you.
>It's blue and puffy and has a subtle shine of moisture and it's amazingly pretty.
>It's all smooth mounds and neat little folds.
>You've seen a lot of vagina on the internet, and you can tell this one is high quality.
>"Uhm, h-hurry Anon, you have to get it out before it spreads."
>"Yes. Of course. Gotta suck out the poison."
>You get down on your hands and knees and crawl forward, your eyes locked on their target.
>You keep going until your nose is filled with the sweet, sour, sweaty odor of an aroused woman.
>As you draw close she pulls her hands out of the way and her wet, delicate flesh withdraws shyly back behind two chubby mounds of blue skin.
>You grip her upper thighs for leverage and push your mouth into the slit, using your tongue to help spread it open.
>You take her lips into your mouth one at a time, sucking on them and massaging them with your tongue.
>Then you spread her open with your thumbs and lick slowly and deeply along every fold, and into every nook and cranny.
>Her clit reveals itself before long.
>You perch your mouth over it and rub against it with the tip of your tongue.
>She can't take the stimulation for long. Her thighs tighten around your head and her ankles lock together behind your back.
>Her legs squeeze and force you against her, pushing your mouth into her pussy.
>You open your mouth wide to engulf her delicious softness and send your tongue forward to explore her depths.
>Suddenly her legs seize up in immense strain and her body convulses.
>Your face is pushed so strongly into her privates that you can't breathe.
>By the time she finally relaxes you have to gasp for breath.
>You sit back to admire your work and notice she managed to get the rest of her clothes off during that.
>She's holding a ragged clump of plant life against her chest. It looks like she was using it as a handle to steady herself and ended up tearing it out of the ground during her orgasm.
>"That's poison ivy."
>>You've seen a lot of vagina on the internet, and you can tell this one is high quality.
I like all length stories, though I really like long stories with regular-ish updates a few thousand words long. It's nice to have something to keep up with. Not manyof those though.
>One Piece is already making me feel gross, haram things towards furries.
Consider this. You are not, in fact, attracted to the dog girl. You are, instead, attracted to her breasts, which are currently covered in Nami's bikini. Therefore, you on some level associate her breasts, and therefore her, with Nami.
Therefore the solution is to fap to Nami. Off with you now.
Nigga she's FLUFFY, this furry meme needs to end.
are they back already? man the weekend threads are tough
That aint fat anon, just sayin, i wont continue any conversation past this
That sounds reasonable
I dont have any aquatic mgs, so have the next best thing
>Girls who live in tropical regions of the Pacific are super chill
>Girls who live out in the more isolated and deeper parts of the ocean are either dark and creepy (like Mindflayers) or basically sea-dwelling rednecks who live out in the sticks
>Asshole Merrows who live in the waters of the New York coast
>they constantly shove you around and tell you in a thick Brooklyn accent "I'm swimmin' 'ere, dipshit!"
Gentlemen, I like boyish girls.
I like girls that are slim and flat. Girls that have an angular jaw. Girl that have a deep voice. Sporty girls that like unflattering clothes. I just want to gently hold them and put my dick all the way inside them.
Well, shit. Now I'm imagining a Holst dressed as pic related.
Y'all niggas GAY-ASS ALP-LOVERS
JAY WHAT THE FUCK IS THAT!?
THAT LOOKS DEAD MAN!
IT'S A BABY FUCKING WHALE MAN!
2 minutes in gimp, the work i go though for shitty jokes
Maids need to get impregnated as maids, get a hooker if you want lewd skintight outfits.
Oh, she wants to play "kidnap the princess", huh?
I'm just a big bully. She needs to break out of her servile attitude and pull herself out of my grasp and get my dick in her mouth before I cum if she ever wants to finish that bathtub.
Well images of character designs do get posted quite a bit on other boards, it was kind of unavoidable at one point.
Really? I'm not really seeing the whole "face" deal and that stance is a pretty common way to show embarrassment.
It's a webcomic that uses lots of flash animations, interactive flash games, an admittedly pretty awesome soundtrack, and has an insanely complicated and confusing storyline. Also it doesn't really look anything like that Oni picture.
Not the crossed arms one. Those artists tend to draw their characters in 'plain ways', to make them seem normal, like they all want to say 'this is me', it ends up making them very recognizable. That's the vibe it gives off. Seriously, look at some google images of homestuck sometime and maybe some deviantart stuff and you'll see it.
They say it because he can overpower monstergirls with ease when grown men in his setting have trouble in groups, like the adventurers guild near the end of the story.
Those people never got to the end where its explained why he's so powerful, plus he's lived alongside several different species his whole life anyway. The only thing that annoys me about him is how quickly he dismisses people who hate the monsters for being rapists and how quickly he forgives the monsters when they try to kidnap and rape. Its like he can't see what a moron he's being.
So they're trying to hard to be unique...by making their character as normal as possible?
Jesus anon you're obviously way out of it. And you made people pos Homestuck pictures in this thread and all that other guy did was post a cute Oni picture. You're the bad guy here.
There's already a Portuguese Man-o-War girl, Anon. Do we really need more stinging, ocean-dwelling invertebrates?
>They say it because he can overpower monstergirls with ease when grown men in his setting have trouble in groups, like the adventurers guild near the end of the story.
Yeah, that's a pretty retarded reason, I thought it was fairly obvious from the start that there was more to it considering he had a magic item attached to him since birth. I agree completely with that other criticism, though.
The one thing I don't understand about Lanternon's stories is why swords are still used by practically everyone: At one point a character uses a gun with magical bullets - which would immediately outclass swords just by existing. There's a reason why we stopped using swords once guns were invented, because they're ridiculously powerful, have range and easy to use. Add magic to it and you've reached whole new levels of unfair advantage.
It's simple, yet complicated.
Like talking about gender identity with those guys.You'd understand if you meet these people in real life.
They think themselves unique so they make their characters 'plain' and they do that over and over, and they either get good but do nothing really remarkable and put on airs of pretension, or they get defensive and pissy about their mediocre while accusing others of 'not getting it' like
Uh oh! The human female girl who was trying to help you get with the monster girl you like has been turned into an Alp by said Monster Girl and you found out via an Email containing an hour of the now Alp'd human girl sucking cocks, crying and he saying sorry she couldn't get her to like you!
How do you react!?
>post something monstergirks can't do
>someone points it out
>but what about mamono mana
>doesn't work that way
>whaaaa you have no imagination/muh canon/no fun allowed
>stupid ass back and firth for the next three hours
"gross" and then i delete it
i also don't believe her story on getting alped, not only can human women not get alped, sucking random dude's cocks, taking pictures of it, and telling a guy they know that a girl he likes made her do this seem like normal human girl behavior
>using a bit and drooling
>white little snake butt getting creampied
Exquisite. Saki has become a great shirihebi.
I have to wonder though if/how they'll manage to avoid getting the guy booted. They can keep doing lewd things for only so long before someone at the shrine figures it out.
But that's no fun.
It'd be better for your Cheshire waifu to suggest blindfold play and start giving you a blowjob but the technique feels different from usual. Only discovering that you just defiled your daughteru's mouth after you take off the blindfold.
>Be fighting in Hell
>Find that one Berserker Pack you've been starving for
>You're almost out of guzzolene for the chainsaw
>Nearly out of ammo to keep the demon girls off of you
>There's a pulsing, blue veined mushroom with "RIP AND TEAR" crudely written above it in blocky letters
>Eat it, your eyes bulge in their sockets, your muscles feel like they're expanding. A red haze is covering your eyes, a massive amount of blood rushing down to your nethers
>Holy shit, your Johnson feels like it's as big and as thick as a telephone pole
>Hear the clopping of hooves nearby
>It's one of the Baronesses of Hell
>Her blood red skin is driving you ballistic like a bull in the fighting pens of Madrid
>Rip your helmet off, showing her your crazy eyed glare, yell out something like "YOU ARE HUGE, YOU HAVE HUGE OVARIES."
>You can't even tell at this point as you're lunging for her
>She towers over you as you both lock arms, fighting for dominance
>For as much strength as she's exerting, you're slowly overpowering her, her eyes drifting and widening to the pillar of flesh between your legs
>Take her down in a moment of surprise, grabbing her horns and irrumating her violently
>Her legs are twitching as you fill her mouth with your spunk, nearly blushing when you pilot yourself into her flashlight vagina
>It's hot enough you're risking a scalding burn, but you're going full ham on her yelling inarticulate things that you're not even sure makes sense
>It doesn't stop until she holds your head to her bosom as both of your bodies twitch in post-coital glow, seed overflowing out of her
>Wake up the next morning, a massive headache from the mushroom
>You're in a bedroom of some kind with a lavish bed
>She's staring at you, her hand glowing green
>Oh shit here comes the pain
"So, what do you plan on naming the daughter you so generously impregnated me with?"
Looking forward to it. If nothing else the reactions of the older Shirohebis getting one upped by Saki should be amusing.
Keep up the good work and your dedication to things going into monster girl butts. Any ideas after this one is done?
Well, as I mentioned before, my next story isn't going here so it'll look like I go dead or awhile. After that though, I'm looking at something in a different setting, maybe
medieval anon getting hired as a butler by a stinky, lazy Gazer princess/ojou-sama.
Fetishistic, mostly. The bulk and the feel and the look are what appeal to me, the things that a lot of people use them for and associate them with are not my thing at all.
If you stay tuned to my pastebin, that's where it'll be when it's done. I may even mention that my pastebin has been updated once it's done, but I'm not even sure I'll go that far.
Not at all actually, though the simplistic nature of Jubjubs in my headcanon/this particular Jubjub may imply that a little. It's much more of an 'unusual clothing that feels weird' fetish. Latex, PVC, this, it's all in that vein.
We'll see. Maybe at the right time.
>It's much more of an 'unusual clothing that feels weird' fetish
Bondage and all that restriction and unconfort shit, man. I just can't into it. Well, like I said before, whatever floats your boat. I do think you're overplaying it, but I can sympathize with not wanting to cast a shitstorm upon the thread.
>I do think you're overplaying it
This. We all have our own tastes but you need to try and branch out a bit.
Also, lolis and bondage are a really messed up mix. Its like mixing ice cream with pizza, if the pizza could land you in jail for having images of it on your harddrive.
Thanks for your opinions anons. If nothing else, I need a break from greentexting so much once lolihebi is done. I only realized today how close I am to burning out on it.
>Baronesses of Hell
I think that genderbent Diablo image gave me a huge demon girls with glowing holes fetish so this pleases me greatly.
Someone get Bollocks or Harblador on this!
>I only realized today how close I am to burning out on it.
And here is the main issue. Do you know why so many writefags vanish? Because they start off churning out stuff constantly and it completely burns them out in a few months. I agree with you, give it a rest for a while then come back with some new ideas and see where it gets you.
>'unusual clothing that feels weird' fetish. Latex, PVC
Now that's something that doesn't get experimented much in the stories in these threads. Consider my interest piqued.
>I need a break from greentexting
Consider my interest further piqued if you make the switch to prose.
Wake up from the nightmare where I was stupid enough to have kids in the first place.
I'd make a terrible dad, I don't have the patience for annoying kids.
I'd need to be husbando'd by a monstergirl who understands I don't want children and would be okay with it too. I can't see it going down well with most species
I wish to make daughterus with my abominable childhood friend.
I actually like Bollocks. Occasionally he can write some nice stuff, like the yandere kitsune thing.
But then he can write awful shit like the christmas manticore. He's the Nicholas Cage of writefags.
Do the piano headpat.
Have them line up and I headpat with both hands at once starting with the outer 2, then meeting at the middle 2, then head back outward. That way everyone gets 2 head pats and nobody is really "last".
>ends up being daughteru
This is why you blind her, not yourself.
>All things considered there'd have to be a lot of "soulmate" stuff going for an anon to get the perfect MG waifu.
Agreed. Fortunately that's the upside of demonic energy/mamonomana. Finding your soulmate could actually happen in such a setting.
>It's more like when you burn out you want to write but nothing happens.
This. I used to write, then one day I just found I couldn't. I still get ideas for things that I feel excited about, but when I start writing them it feels stupid or badly planned so I stop and leave it to fade away from memory.
>not bringing up is best work with great directors, only Bruckheimer tier garbage
Dude, Bad Lieutenant was his best crazy
Leaving Las Vegas was best dramatic
Raising Arizona was best comedy
>Bringing my name up out of nowhere when you should have the common sense to know I don't write in earnest anymore avoid some (much earned) disdain from people in here
>Some ideas spitballing, playing the not-a-pronoun game as if to bait people into guessing specifics
Okay, I'm fucking triggered by the mentioning of Ghost Rider being a
former Marvel neckbeard.
>Blackheart transforms into Legion, still uses the "I" and "My" pronouns when his body is literally composed of god-knows-how-many bullshit souls and demons
>Blue Ghost Rider with a romantic subplot
>Melbourne, Australia is apparently Texas
>Turning THE Sam Elliott, one of Western cinema's fathers with people like Clint Eastword, Ennio Moriccone, etc into a fucking knock-off of Belle Bonnet from The Real Adventures Of Jonny Quest
That being said
I just want to go back to doing nothing and building gunpla over shoe-horning silly ideas at the thread expecting people to care. So see ya.
>all this autism
So this is what /co/ does to people?
/co/ had nothing to do with it. I just hate seeing comic book characters I enjoyed get butchered on screen. Just like in
Superman Returns where he can apparently lift a continent of Kryptonite with no adverse effects.
Tell me Anon, how does one friendzone a monster girl?
Little bit of col. A and B
Absolutely nothing. It's just easier if you all tell me what you want more or less of and I'll try to accommodate you.
>He listens to people over just writing what he wants because he's a faggot