>"Hi there, Anon! Gee, your house was a bit tricky to find but I managed to find it! I hope me staying over isn't a problem. Is it okay if I sleep with you tonight?"
Get out before i call the glue factory, you non unicorn shite
>"Where's your cutie mark?"
>She shifts uncomfortably, shrugging.
>"That's not important, we can cover all the weeny teeny details later. Where am I sleeping?"
>"Uh well, I have a couch if you want..."
>"Eh? Why can't I just stay with you in your bed?"
Fuck that, im going to make you a lovely dinner.
"S-Sure! My bed is probably big enough...it's a single."
>"Perfect! I can squeeze...somewhere."
"I hope you do know that uh...I'm a guy...you're a girl...I'm not a pedophile either so..."
>"Is that a short joke? I'm a full adult pony, Anon!"
"Ah my mistake..."
>You take her bag, moving it to your room. She follows happily, admiring your home.
"So remind me again, what's your name?"
>"You don't remember? Gee Anon, I suppose I don't know you that well after all. My name's Chap."
"Nice to have you. You hungry? I can cook you dinner."
>"You know how to cook? I don't know if I quite believe ya, eh?"
I'm going to call you Chappie because of that robot movie I haven't seen. Let's prove her wrong and cook something! I would have suggested heating up a pizza in the oven but making spaghetti is a good idea too.
Oh this is curious.
How are we to choose our adventure though dear, if we have no prompts?
Because if there are no prompts, its merely a visual novel. Not that anyone is complaining that is.
It just keeps going and going, piling on everything this faggot has in the pantry.
Have something that's a little more realistic to make for your dietary needs.
>Wipe your tears and blame the onions for them, even though you know she left you because you weren't good enough.
hahahahahaha oh God, why?
"Hey, I'm a great chef. Want to try some of my spaghetti?"
>"Spaghetti? Hmm, it's been a while since I've had that stuff! You sure you can impress me?"
"My spaghetti is the best you will ever eat."
>You both walk into the kitchen and you begin to prepare the supplies.
>Chap takes a seat beside you, watching curiously.
>Make homemade noodles or premade?
I would go with premade though it would seem the majority has voted to make homemade! Hope she's not too hungry because making everything from scratch is going to take some time.
Vegetarian, just for you.
A oil soused tomato cut into tiny pieces. Slightly fried in the oil it was soused in. With some onions.
Some fresh mashed tomatoes and a bit tomato paste with water.
At least mix in the cooked noodles and top it with Oregano.
>how many times can you microwave a bowl of ramen before it begins to question it's existence
>mfw I suggested she do a CYOA in the future
Glacier, I just popped a bag of popcorn for this.
>You begin to prepare in order to make your own noodles.
>"Made from scratch? Dang, Anon. I wasn't expecting this when I decided to come over. Guess we'll have plenty of time to talk about stuff."
"Ahah, I have to treat you to something special!"
>"I getcha, I getcha but this is something real special. I can't even cook this stuff."
"Well you don't have opposable thumbs."
>"Truth...so uh, you live here alone? Got a marefriend?"
Yeah we live alone. No we don't have a marefriend. Oh god I hope she doesn't look for our porn where ever and whatever it might be. Ponies can't into computers hopefully. If we even have a computer. A hidden magazine would screw us over.
>Blank flank, no cutie mark
>A mare that you never have seen in your life randomly and misterously arrived on your house
Yeah that seems about ri-
>Suddenly realization strikes Anon's mind
>A story called 'Story of the blanks'
>Cutie-markless ponies are evil ghosts of the past seeking to caugh innocent victims
She's a ghost
Abort Abort Abort
Evacuate the zone inmediadly
>Anon jumps through the window, desperadly running away from the mare
>The misterious mare just stares as the strange green human being escapes
>She was a ghost? We will never know
DONT BELIEVE HER LIES
"Uh yeah, I live alone. Don't have a mare friend either."
>"Dang shame. You're better lookin' than most stallions I see out there."
>"Maybe that's why I don't got no colt friend neither."
>"I hear ya."
>You begin to roll out the dough.
"You seem pretty forward. Most mares aren't so...direct."
>"I get things done, Anon. Got that can-do spirit! Hmm...mind if I check out some more of your home?"
>Let her explore or insist her to stay with you.
"Am I boring you already?"
>"Course not, but I don't wanna dig into your personal stuff too early into my arrival. I'll just let ya cook quietly."
"S-Sure you can explore...uh just don't...go snooping around in places you shouldn't."
>"I ain't gonna judge ya if ya got naughty stuff. I got needs to, ya know. Mares get frisky just like everypony else."
>She leaves your side to explore.
>What are you fearful she might find?
collection of antique ropes and handcuffs
...what? My dad was a police officer and I was in the scouts so I know my knots.
Nothing fishy about it, they're just very personally significant.
I think my inner /k/ommando just came a little.
If she were to find something would she even tell us she found it or would she for instance start bending down in front of us because we owned lots of copies of 'pony butts monthly." because she knows that's our fetish.
>she finds our wardrobe
>"hee, check out all these neat human clothes!"
>tries some of them on
>she's wearing an oversized sweatshirt that is way too big for her and drapes over her whole body
>"Hey Anon, look! I'm you!"
>turns around to show off the socks
she's not wearing a bottom
christ have mercy
>Chap is gone for a good hour. You begin to worry, the noodles are nearly finished! Where was she?
>You turn around.
>Chap is holding up a handful of magazines and a bit of rope.
>"Mind if I do a bit of light readin' before supper?"
>She is holding what appears to be news articles regarding Pinkie Pie's parties and PlayPony.
>self insert OC story
>story involving self insert an anon
>anon represents everyone else
usually OCs, as well as self inserts, are frowned upon. i dont want to be 'that guy,' but i cant help but think shes getting a pass because she does decent art and because yall are horny fucking faggots.
i like your art glacier, but this is austistic as shit, and these faggots shouldnt be encouraging it. were it any other self insert, theyd all be flipping their shit.
just had to say something.
B-b-b-but you can't be mean to her! You can't be mean to girls on the internet!
It's a changeling. Ask why it is is lying and not being open with its true self.
But we do have a girfriend
Read the news, its more interesting than Playpony
Self-insert are frowned upon because the generally are super-perfect power-fantasy unrealistic shits.
But so far I'm just seeing chillaxadood trying to figure out what the hell is going on, making spaghetti at 4 in the morning.
>but it's autistic!
No, it's not.
Flapping your arms and shrieking at anything that challenges your preconceived notion of how a place SHOULD be is one of the primary symptoms, though.
Its... Its not even...
It's been like, a few hours. How is it even comparable to any other CYOA, yet.
It's a bit autistic, I'll give it that. /mlp/ has a history of autism so I'm not sure this is notable enough to have an issue with. For now I say let it play out and if she wants to do another CYOA later we can recommend it focus on canon pones.
>10 generals for OC's
>literally OC general
>What is Shooting Stars
>What is Filly Fantasy
>What is ASNYIP
>What is Branson
>What is logic
>How do make post?
Im not defending it, but goddamn your post sure is fucking stupid Anon.
"Yeah uh, go ahead. Dinner will be ready soon."
>"Gotcha, champ. Just holler if ya need me."
>It takes you another 45 minutes to prepare and boil the pasta, before you decide to just use premade sauce, better to not make her wait any longer.
"Hey Chap, spaghetti's done!"
>"Oy! Oy! Look!"
>She barrels into the dining area, a rope-crown atop her head.
>"I learned this trick from my mum, when I was a filly see."
>"Also, what the hay you doin' with this old copy of PlayPony? This is from a few months ago. Gotta keep yourself in fresh stock of materials, see."
>"No need to apologize, Anon. I know how it gets... Now where's that pasta?"
"Here, careful. It's kinda hot."
>"Guess we'll see if ya really can cook."
Why can't you faggots just be honest and say "Yes, it's true, but we like her porn so we'll let it go for now?" Anyone that has spent any decent amount of time here knows this. You aren't fooling anyone.
Ask about her mom. That rope crown is fuckin adorable. Oh, and what does she do for like, a living? And is now a good time yet to ask about the invisible cutie mark?
man, who even needs lewd, I'd be content just cuddling this qt pony to sleep
Right? Everyone is trying to fucking rationalize why it gets a pass when they shouldn't be shameful in admitting it makes their dick tingle.
God damn, these faggots are getting almost as defensive as some Tumblrina SJWs, or as bad as bronies putting the show on a pedestal as some kind of work of art. Tone down your guys' fucking autism.
Because we want to save face, and appear consistent in some manner. Frankly, if this turns out to be shit, it's not going to change my opinion of her. She makes phenomenal porn. She doesn't have to be a great story-teller
We're what, nine posts into the CYOA so far? Ten? Too early for me to call it anything, good or bad. We'll wait and see if it turns out to be worth all the attention. Artwork's good at least.
I just feel bad for GW cause they'll think this is the norm or they're super special and can get away with this stuff but eventually anons will turn on them for it and that'll be the end of GW.
Because I'm not pretending that this doesn't tickle my dick like all the rest of these beta-ass faggots? Really? Here I thought the euphoric ones were the ones who try acting like gentelmen to get pussy.
These quads is at least aware of himself being a faget, and admits it's more about the porn.
Therein leading to potential attention whoring, and people rushing to her defense is only going to enable that.
When has this plan ever worked before?
A gift of quads as a reward for your honesty
GW is more than willing to learn how the board runs. Bullshitting her and kissing ass is only going to teach her the wrong things and eventually everyone will just get sick of it.
And this self-righteous search for this supposed admittance isn't any more autistic?
Fuck off, faggot.
I'm here because I'm remotely interested, like many people. If there's porn that's just like a cherry on top.
>M-muh quality control
>M-muh board police
People tend to quickly figure out how shit works here around here, or they leave, or they get ridiculed and everyone has a nice laugh.
"Sorry if this is kind of rude...but...how do you know me?"
>"Mm. I'm a friend of your friend. That friend thought it'd be cool if I got to stay over here. They know how lonely this place is I guess. You could use a bit of company, eh?"
"Ah...uh, what do you do for a living?"
>"Me? I ain't got no job. No pony wants to hire me. Guess I'm just too good for them, heh?"
>Chap casually shoves a forkful of pasta in her mouth. She chews, nods her head and continues to talk.
>"Mmf, but uh, ye. Been lookin' for a job. Really! But ain't no luck."
"Well I hope you find somewhere to stay. Is now a bad time to ask about your cutie mark?"
>"...I guess...you seem like a chill dude so here."
>She bends over a bit, wiping a hoof against her flank, revealing a cutie mark underneath some sort of powder rub. The cutie mark was that of an eyeglass, with letters underneath.
>"Can't tell no pony my talent is reading, ya hear? Ain't need ponies sayin' I'm a nerd. A loser! I'd lose my rep. I love reading, though. Really. I can't er, keep the information in my head real well...but I guess that just makes reading a book a second time more exciting, eh?"
I have no idea what anyone's talking about right now. Someone is mad about an oc and anon having a story written about them and they can't make roll based decisions like " 5 decides"
"you decide to slap chap and she's angry with you."
Those adventures are retarded.
>Porn is just the cherry on top
Anon please, if this was the first thing GW did she would've been shut down and shit on. The only reason people care is because she makes their dicks hard.
>special talent is reading
thats not me, but
>2 reaction images with the same pony
Aaw, Chap, that's just sad.
You shouldn't cover up your cutie mark like that, there's nothing nerdy about liking to read.
I mean, c'mon, what 'rep' is it that you have, anyways? It's not like there are pony gangsters in this town, or something.
Meh, she started on a whim, saved by the initial ban on a whim, and found supporters who did so on a whim. It was just good chance that's all. Luckily there happens to be great porn, so its a win win scenario.
Why do you think she got the rampart crowd? Some of us joined on a whim, others for the porn. That should be common sense friendo.
It all depends on the audience I suppose, Why not enjoy our flavour of the month for now, and the fresh blood it brings?
>not interested in ponies sexually. You want that imageboard over there son.
I'll admit there's a bit more white knighting going on than strictly necessary, but you're going full-on "you're autists who just want to fap and are in denial of how right I am". You know how the internet works. Come on too strong attacking something, and people will naturally go on the defensive to counter what you're saying. You want to make a good point and have anyone listen around here, you should first and foremost try not to act like a dick about it. The more extreme the complaints, the more extreme the arguments against them will be. That's the natural way of things.
Oh, so sorry you faggots feel persecuted for kissing her ass. I don't see how you being called out for your bullshit in any way means I'm not also enjoying the content. I'm at least admitting it's because of sexual instead of making excuses.
This isn't my thread, asshole. Contrary to what you believe, I'm not actually selfish like that. If I'm going to contribute I'll do it where the content belongs.
Shit, you caught me!
Hey! I know the perfect job for you! You could work at the library! Sure, it's a fixer-upper, but that's part of the fun!
Jump up from your seat and shout in her face "NNNNEEEERRRDDDD!!!!!
>all those books
>all those pages of knowledge
>all those memories
every time, man. I'm not ready for Season 5, when Twilight is
going to be shown having trouble adjusting
>I'm at least admitting it's because of sexual instead of making excuses
I know the word "projecting" is often a cheap buzzword on /mlp/, but that's what this sounds like to me. Just because you only like it sexually doesn't mean that's how everyone else sees things. It's a pretty narrow viewpoint to insist people can only enjoy things for one reason.
They already are flavor of the month. That's why there's so many faggots white knighting the shit out of them already. I don't think they'll survive the massive drop when anons get over them. We have to lessen the impact. I'm not saying everyone should be shitting all over them for this, just be fuckin honest.
Truer words have never been spoken. All things will fade, as do all men and women. However, don't forget that you are here forever, and that the ride truly never ends. Enjoy this part of it, while you can.
Year 4 of the ride, still no end in sight.
Literally not how this is going at all.
All I see is legitimate damage control by a bunch of faggots in denial of why they're supporting a fucking OCxAnon CYOA, something that would normally be shit on, because it could lead to sex.
And I'm being told I'M wrong for admitting what it is while still complimenting the artist.
The hypocrisy is real.
>I love reading, I don't think it'd hurt your image much. I mean you're still cool in my book.
All I can imagine is Anon trying to say this, but all he manages to do is make his play on words absolutely cringe-worthy
'cuz they were nothing but porn, right?
Nice try, but that's not all me.
Christ, all this butthurt floating around.
Anon dropping some salt over a cyoa and lewd suggestions
>this whole thread
This is the greatest movie I've seen in a while.
pls keep up with the story
and the bickerings :^)
That's weapon grade diabetes right there.
>"WAHHHH These anon's are whiteknighting something we would normally hate JUST BECAUSE SHES A GIRL!!"
thats not how it works, idiot
you're the type of guy who shits on people who listen to NEW music
ITT: Drawfag tries to do a good thing for our ailing board and gets shit on by 'oldfags' who cry autism to fit in.
Welcome to neo-/mlp/, all the real horsefuckers left a long time ago.
Keep going drawfag, I at least see what you're trying to do for us here.
Oh my god
ya'll need to stop bickering and have fun.
Who cares that it's oc x anon. TONS of threads have had this same subject.
Who gives a shit if the main characters are ocs? If the people reading it are entertained, and if the person drawing is having fun doing it, then just sit back and enjoy the show
Anon, are you brand new here? What is the most common thing that happens to this type of story?
Why would you even do that. I laughed, but shit man, that doesn't help you any.
Learn to read faggot, where does it mention anything about GW being a girl in that post?
Alright, I'm done reasoning with someone who doesn't care about reason.
You're a dick.
It's not really more complicated than that. You're a shallow faggot who insists everyone who's not as shallow as you is lying. You talk shit about others and expect them to thank you for it, because that is how little you comprehend other people.
"Reading? Are you...extraordinarily good at it or something?"
>"Of course! I can whizz through a novel in no time flat, see. I just...I don't wanna be known as that weirdo who spends all her time in a book, ya feel?"
"Well at the very least you can reveal your special talent to employers. They can't hire if they don't know what you're good at."
>"I see yer point, Anon. I guess I just...I dunno...I wish I coulda had a more excitin' talent. Like wrestlin' bears or kickin' flank in a boxing ring!"
>Chap punches at the air enthusiastically, bits of spaghetti hanging from her mouth.
"Please don't knock over that pasta."
>"Oop! Sorry, my bad. My inner beast tried to get out, wachawww!"
"...Anyways, what kind of rep do you even need to keep?"
>"Ponies around here think I'm cool, see. As a filly, havin' no cutiemark is weird...awful, I'd gamble to say, but when you're an adult you're edgy and cool, ponies think yer tough, like you ain't found your place in life yet because you're so hardcore."
"I don't really...think that's accurate. I think it makes people think you're ah...unstable? Unreliable?"
>"Eh? Really? Think I should let people know I'm a huge nerd? That what yer sayin? Readin' ain't a cool talent...ya can't be a cool pony who knows how to read good...I can't even remember mosta the stuff I read!"
>Scold her or reason with her?
>/mlp/ finally gets some fresh content
I'm not even surprised, just disappointed. The best we can do is just ignore the bait and try to save what's left of this thread.
Not at all, it's just funny how everyone is clamoring to defend it as good content.
They are -clamoring- to defend someone who obviously does not need the fucking defense. Literally no one in here has said it was bad content, yet these faggots are latching onto that as their defense. And that's not whiteknighting?
Ok, fuck it, whatever. They can wallow in their bullshit for all I care as they tip their fedoras at the new drawfriend "Mi'lady".
Jesus Christ, when the fuck did /mlp/ get so god damn sensitive?
The "being a girl" was tacked on as an after thought. I haven't seen any posts saying any of this is solely because she's a girl. This entire argument has been about anons blowing so much smoke up GW's ass she's in danger of turning into a blimp because no one can admit the only reason they're letting this shit slide is because her art makes their dicks hard.
>ya can't be a cool pony who knows how to read good.
Well, that's what you think, but aren't the coolest ponies cool because they don't care about what other ponies think?
Boom. If you go read a lot, and you're still cool, ponies will think you're extra cool. Maybe?
Tried to explain to the faggot that an overly aggressive approach will only put people on the defensive, but he ignored the post entirely and started acting like an even bigger cunt than he already was.
Go to any board where there happens to be a nice thing going on and try to shit on it. I dare you.
>But it doesn't exist :^)
Of course it wouldn't you fucking ingrate because of little shits like you with your /b/ /v/ mentality
Look, what's your obsession with looking cool? Don't you think having money, a comfortable place to live, and not having to hide your talent would be far better, and easier, than hiding your special talent so that people will think you're "exciting" and "hardcore?" I dealt with those kinds of kids in high school. Trust me. You don't want to be like them
>nearly 90 people
>in a thread with a story that would take up 1-2 posts in total
>with one of the most basic story prompts on the planet
>no ulterior motives here
you faggots are so transparent and deep in denial its unreal.
Glacier, just stop. This anon x oc shit is autistic and you know it. Nobody wants this here.
The last 40 threads I was preaching the same thing, nobody listened.
These imbeciles have as much quality control as EqD.
I'm glad that GC is ignoring the retardation like we told them to.
Chill, if you don't like it, just leave, but the only way to get better at making a CYOA is to make a CYOA. I'm enjoying it, even though it's basic. You don't start with a super complex story if you're not used to doing one.
Weathering the storm like a boss.
Has she actually tried remembering what she reads? I think she is afraid to really explore her talent because she thinks it's "uncool." Let the rainbow remind her that reading is for cool nerds.
Well Princess Twilight used to live in a library, and I've even heard that that Rainbow Dash is a huge fan of those Daring Do books.
Maybe if you learned to represent yourself in a slightly lamer way, it'd allow you to find a job and such. Then when you're financially secure enough you can act in your normally cool persona to maintain your preferred image
>tfw I kind of empathize with this character
Joke's on you, I don't browse /b/ or /v/ and I hate their shitty mentality.
I know quality content when I see it, and I know I don't have to jump to the creator's defense when someone questions it. And literally no one in here is questioning Glacier's content. Everybody is getting butthurt because somebody called them whiteknights, instead of ignoring the shitpost and NOT fulfilling the fucking prophesy.
>Nobody wants this here.
Okay, that's kind of retarded. I agree, this CYOA isn't all that great, but people are allowed to like what they like. I personally think LSA's content is shitty, and bland, and that NaOH's story is pretty bad, but I don't go to those threads declaring that, and saying that it doesn't belong. I take my hot opinions to the unpopular opinions threads, and other places they might be relevant. I'm not going to shit up a thread where the content takes place
The only way to get better is if people are actually honest about it. Anons are just going to tell her how amazing it was just to get more porn and they'll never get any better. Eventually anons will get tired and turn on her, then they're left with no improvement and no support.
>implying its bait
its a few faggots calling out other faggots for being thirsty hypocrites, and those faggots not only denying it, but actively defending shit they would normally be against.
>No, you don't want it here. What you want is porn.
Oh, thanks for letting me know what I REALLY want
I needed some anonymous fucktard over the internet to let me know what I *actually* want and don't want. Thank Christ that you're here to set me straight.
Yet they keep it up and insist it's everyone else's fault for being annoyed, as if the presence of disagreement proves them right. It's a stunning irony that fans of a show about friendship would know so little about the basics of how to talk to people.
>hey, im a cute single pone girl, mind if i sleep with you in your bed?
sure. im a single adult male named anon, and your flanks are fucking amazing.
nothing. want dinner?
>sure. can i look at your porn?
dinner has come.
>so have i.
Fuck, I really don't want to drop this. /mlp/ needs more awesome drawfags like GW. She's completely on board with learning how the board works and if everyone would just be honest instead ass-kissing and white knighting, we could actually maybe keep an awesome drawfag around. Just say "Hey, generally self insert OC x self insert anon stuff isn't normally put up with. We'll let it slide cause we want to see where this is going but just a heads up." Instead everyone is either in full denial mode or straight aggressive baiting mode.
How can anyone possibly think this is a good story when there hasn't even been a story yet? It's like telling me about how you love an author's writing because the book cover was pretty.
>Don't get so flank flustered someone read your mind anon.
>Because I say that he read your mind, it actually means that he read your mind
>I'm right, you're wrong LALALALALA :)
Please stop pretending to be retarded. Also, nice inb4.
>huehuehue now he can't reply saying that he's not actually mad, because then he'll be playing right into my inb4 trap, which will make me right! Mwahaha!
I knew that the butthurt was gonna bump out the story. Darn. It was just getting interesting, too.
I think from this post its safe to say everyone is whiteknighting because she is a girl.
Keep sprinkling the autistic shit that you received as "content".
No one was gushing about the content, they were happily participating in something fun. You got jelly and asshurt, probably because you are transferring something else in your life to this topic, and shat all over everything under the guise of offering "criticism" where none was warranted or desired. You keep saying "denial, denial, denial"... perhaps you should start looking inward.
Don't stop the story. These guys are super butthurt that someone new is here and they're sick of hiatus induced stories. Eventually they'll go find another general to shit in and everyone can go back to doing whatever it was before.
First you assume I'm someone I'm not, secondly people absolutely gushing about it. Either actually bother to read the posts or stay out of the discussion. Here's one freebie, get the rest yourself. >>22262975
How many cyoa's have you even been in? If people find one boring they stop playing and then leave. That or they suggest things to make it better instead of shitting themselves and calling everyone a faggot who's only here because the creator made porn. Let's say the story ends "tomorrow" after fucking the oc and gc asks us what we think. we could then give our critique and say "oh the story was predictable, you should have drawn this huge world where anon goes on an adventure to stop a big bad villain and it should have also been roll based so that the story could go in any direction to make it fun. Oh and we should also have money and equipment! This is how -I- think would make the next adventure you make better" Saying "this is shit because it's an oc and everyone is going to try to fuck them" before anything even happened isn't helping anyone and you're really just bitching.
this thread has plenty of fuel to conclude, assuming glacier keeps going.
im just sticking around for the inevitable banging and all the anons claiming theyre not here for that sole reason posting sweating reaction images.
"Look, Chap...all I'm saying is that you really shouldn't care about what other ponies think of you, to the point that it gets in the way of how you live."
>"I...I guess...I don't really wanna read for the rest of my life, though. Reading as a career? How lame is that?"
"Wait, have you um, talked to anyone about your memory problems?"
>"Not really. I ain't one to show weakness, Anon."
"I got that. You should really do something about it, though."
>"Mmyeah...you make a fair point there."
"Just do it so you can get a stable job and be comfortable, then you can be cool and stuff. Confidence is key, you know. If you have enough confidence in yourself, people will naturally think you know what you're doing."
>"Maybe after this I should find somethin' to pay my bills with..."
"Hey that's the spirit!"
>"Thanks, Anon. You're the first person I've ever really talked bout' this stuff with. You sure you don't think I'm a nerd still?"
"Nah. You're pretty hardcore in my book."
>"Hey how bout' I come over another day and we can go find some bears to wrestle, eh?"
>After dinner, you both proceed to get ready for bed. Chap slept in your bed on top of your stomach, making for an uncomfortable night of rest.
Thanks for participating (those that did!) this was mostly just a quick, experimental CYOA-novel-story-shit thing to test out different methods and to see how most people generally interact with a quest. Sorry if it wasn't very interesting, was kinda making it up as I went!
>selecting a post that responds to your completely unprovoked bullshit (or rather, the completely unprovoked bullshit that you are now defending)
you have no leg to stand on
you could have easily ignored the thread, but you didn't, because you wanted attention
Any chance we could see some other endings? Just out of curiosity.
Both of the posts you replied to were from me. Think about that. Realize that I was talking about you both times and consider those like you to be the root of the problem.
People do not think this IS a good story any more than they think this IS good porn. At this point, it has developed into neither. I imagine people are interested because they believe it has the potential to become both, not to mention simply liking the art regardless of what it portrays. But you insist that it must be purely for the porn, despite previous threads having shown that the artist can do SFW content and that people greatly appreciated it. You are calling people liars when all they are doing is liking something for a different reason than you.
Pic related. Look at what you're doing and ask yourself some serious questions.
Oh, and hey, the story finished without porn. People who enjoyed it can now conclusively say that's not what they were here for. Faggot.
>no banging occurred
oh man, thats even better.
Woah, slow your pones there anon. I'm the anon that agrees the hyper aggressive approach is retarded so the 'calling everyone faggots' stuff is someone else's issue.
I'm the anon that just wants people to be honest, and on that topic, lets be honest. Based on the defense force that cropped up here do you really think a critique thread would turn into anything but more hardcore white knighting and ass kissing? When has mlp EVER worked like that? Either the cyoa is shut down due to attacks or disinterest or everyone kisses ass until they get bored and latch onto a new artist.
8/10, I had fun with it, even if it was short. I can't really point out anything wrong with it at all if this was an experiment.
You're also based for not letting the shitposting affect you, fags like you are why I still post on /mlp/
Pretty good for a first try. Established the pone's personality well, which could allow for her to be used for other things later. Art was great as usual. Hope to see you do more like it in the future.
To be honest, it's not really a defense force on behalf of the author, it's more on behalf of ourselves in that we are offended by stupidity. I'm certainly transferring a lot of my own emotions to this discussion because I see this poisonous self-righteous attitude all over the board and 4chan in general
Critique is good when it is helpful and objective, not when it's a projection of teenage angst