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Last thread: >>25353951
Man I know what that's like. I remember moths ago I had this big JAD group-shot in the bar that I just needed to add some shadows to and when I went to open the .xcf to finish it up the next day, the file was corrupted and wont open. 4-8 hours down the drain.
At worst you'll maybe waste a few hours of your life if it doesn't work out and your quest crashes like a Coltshan one. And if people like it you'll waste way more time, but someone will have fun.
kind of a hard position to frot when you're a horse.
I dunno, I gave it a shot.
Indeed! We could have requested Nina tongue lashing Halley's puffy satyr pussy while she sits on her face.
I am however, not at all disappointed with what we've been given.
Actual trekie, played a whole load of STO, and some of the Voyager, New generation and some of the Enterprise series, so if I decide to dive in, expect some relatedness to forementioned series.
have a bonus
sorry, but it's late as fuk m8, so I'm probably not gonna do it tonights
I'll likely give it a whack sometime after I finish running tomorrow or earlier if i need a warmup sketch
as for treads comic
it's getting worked on.
might be a bit lengthy, though
Urban Survival: >>25300004
FOE 2: >>25360775
Runaway Hayride: >>25357983
You shouldn't be on the surface during the day at all if you're anywhere near a carrier group. If you come across a carrier and you don't have a full battery you need to turn 360 degrees and leave
I've got this idea for a CYOA. Where you would play as 3 MC's and their companion in a corrupt city under a tyrranical rule. Who will affect things that change throughout the city.
I can't decide on the occupation's for the characters. Two of them are City Guard's, and I can't decide on the other 4 characters occupation's, Two lower class jobs and 2 upper class jobs. Any advice.
So far I have two city guard's, and a Thug. I think I'll use the Butler as well.
The time period is not as modern, as people still use Melee weapon's, along with Gun's powered by magic. It's in a industrial revolution with magic being used as a source of fuel and energy.
As much as I prefer Temple of Insertwittynamehere, I'm going to vote for Threshold here
I really want to see the thing finished and I'm pretty sure it's going to be much more comfortable for everyone involved
Blitz's party facing the Greater Medusa
Gisela suddenly throws a hissy fit saying she loved Blitz all along and wants him all for himself
Greater Medusa kills herself out of shame
Reconciliation orgy finale
Hey CYOA. What CYOA waifu's have no lewds, that you wish did?
DFU ending is beyond satisfying.
I have the terrible feeling that Aight will show up with another epilogue that will turn our good ending sour. I'd prefer to live with the idea that we ended up running a farm as a part of Piryte's harem and with Flip and her husband living as farmhands on the property.
Righto. It's been a half hour and the votes are pretty clear.
Threshoween finishes up now! Get in here and vote for how to end it!
>Blitz's 'straight' gay only adventure dong
>Jet's fucking banana dick
>Eve's 'pathetic' 0% ability vagoo
>Gisela's 'ruthless' catpussy
>Carver's 'dancing' combat cunt
>Flashbang's superior 'wriggle' hole
If I had a picture of ''quality Carver and Blitz time'', it would be this one
Of course, Carver being Snake and Blitz being Ocelot
I kind of want to see a rendition of the group photo we took.
>Muffin Top sneaks down the corridor, carful to avoid any traps. Sweat drips down her muzzle as she recovers from the grueling trek up the stairs. "Why did I let myself get this out of shape?"she asks herself.
>Finally she decides to take a break and leans against a nearby wall. Just as she lets out a sigh of relief a menacing click echoes through the hall as her hoof sinks down on the stone she is standing on.
>She only has a brief moment of panic before a large net scoops her up and hoists her into the air.
>Muffin top struggles to climb out of the tangle of rope the is in but she only manages to get herself more entwined in the net.
>After struggling for about twenty minutes she settles down in defeat, her plump pony flank pushing through the holes in the net.
After some time a temple guard walks into the corridor and looks up with a devious smile.
>"Swiggity Swoody", the guard says before cutting down the green mare. She hits the ground with a hard thud, landing on her belly. As she takes a moment to recover, the temple guard stands over her. Muffin Top looks back to see the cultist stallion hovering over her, fully erect.
She slowly raises to her hooves and begins to sneak away.
>"Poon tang," the stallion mutters as a pushes his hoof into the back a Muffin Top's neck and dives his throbbing member between her folds.
>Muffin Top lets out a gasp as the stallion immediately bottoms himself out thumping her womb with the tip of his horse-cock. The stallion grunts as her forcefully smashes his hips into Muffin's cushion like rear. The stallion pound away, eventually grabbing the plump mare by the haunches and lifting her supple ass.
>Muffin top can no longer repress her pleasure as she bites her hoof and begins to lube her captor's dick with the wet passion leaking out of her vagina. The stallion recognises this and leans down to lightly bite her ear.
>At this point, the chubby mare can no longer take it, she lets out a scream and releases a torrent of vaginal fluid as her knees begin to shake. The stallion continues to pump away until he too releases and fills Muffin Top with his hot seed.
>Muffin top pants on the floor, too tired to move as the stallion rolls off of her and passes out. "Maybe I can get out of this Muffin Top thinks to herself."
From Mares und Panzer? I made this once. Panzer said he really liked it, but I think I was a tad tamer than he wanted on the mane.
>Muffin Top's plump pony flank
I remember there was a script that allowed rolls in every board, you'd post "Roll 1d10" and it'd do it.
Any idea of what was it called? or would it be better to simply roll in /tg/ and link to the rolling post?
It just werks.
QMs have fudging rights, and if you always show the players the rolls, you take those rights away.
Sure, you're forced to be honest, but personally, the dice have been much more punishing than I have been.
Maybe I'm too soft.
I pray to the dice god every morning, I am sure everything will be fine.
Also, each individual character has 3 lifes per session. Or chapter. I still haven't decided upon that. Maybe one more (Up to three) is gotten every time an area is exited for the first time?
The way I see it, you should only give your players death if the decisions they're making deserve it.
For example, the players once rolled three consecutive critfails on a D20, but they were making the right decisions, so I rewarded them with success, but gave a little extra negative that didn't directly impact the character's health.
You're not supposed to be proud of your murderous intents, Inept
That's why I am forgiving. Bad decisions kill without rolls and fuck characters permanently by cripling them or something like that.
Ya fugin Sierra lover. I bet you love the monkey island section of Monkey Island.
Right now I am planning, AKA "Everything is convulted and only two of those features will be seen in the end product".
Sure, why not. Please understand that it still isn't my final version since the code is a fucking mess and there's still some minor bugs/annoyances I want to fix but don't have much time to.
Good news and bad news.
Good news is that I pretty much have it worked out in my head and I just have to type it out, which will hopefully be sometime this week.
Bad news is that there will be no paddles.
I also have a little something already written up if anyone is interested.
>easy and storm get drunk after the mission
>proceed to have sex
Greyscale's horn is actually sucking in the evil energy that's abundant in the world, and it's drawing monsters near to her/causing her to see things. As well as it also not allowing her to use her magic as well as she should be, it's slowly causing her to go insane. This happened before, and to stop herself from going over the edge, she broke off her horn. Unfortunately, she didn't know that doing that would cause her to lose her memory. In her dazed stupor, she climbed into a basement seeking shelter, and fell asleep in a tomb, not knowing that something would cover the tomb, sealing her inside.
She then awoke, starting the quest.
The evil energy that she's sucking in is sentient and is trying to take over her body.
He did a good job blocking that attack with his ass like that.
Oh, and something else.
I remember there was a pic of her in a sort of "Demonic mode" (Dark blue coat, red eye, floaty mane) that I can't find in derpibooru
There was this anon who started to have lucid dreams were a pone, Safe Haven, would rescue him from a evil force he never got a chance to see. He'd write greentexts of his dreams with her.
Gar? Is that a quest character name or the pen name of the creator?
>tfw thinking of making a CYOA based on this guy
Unsure, considering the bows and the claymore. Should I try?
Gar Iceon, bastardization of Garrison from /pol/
Res has the weirdest naming conventions.
At least most of the batponies and Floral have normalish names
Ah, here it is. In my old messy pics folder.
Say what you want, it may be edgy as fuck, but I love her "Haha you are so fucked" face.
To be fair, an asterism is a quality of gems, which Ast is interested in. And I looked it up and a hypostome is a part of a trilobite, and Hype has expressed interest in fossils before
-Tara mission ends with the good guys saving the day
-players vote for esmeralda.
intermission begins, we're Tara again and returning the card and squishy to threshhold.
-something goes wrong and some monster grabs the princess, Steel tries to save her but fails and is grievously wounded.
-nobody knows what to do and Steel spirals into a depression, Tara tries to help him but can't, all she knows how to do is distract someones heart, she can't heal one. Her worldview of keeping her distance now clashes with her having found a friend who would help anyone but she cannot help now that he needs it.
-Willow pops in and saves the day by being there for steel emotionally and supporting him.
-Tara, recognizing that willow can do what she cant, leaves canterlot and basically disappears.
-Keys realizes she has to do something to help but is too weak, so she steals the adimantium cuffs and uses them on esmeralda.
-Esmeralda now gets to go free without the players fearing she would turn evil because keys is there as a normalizing force and because with Tara missing, Steel injured and Willow with Steel, there needs to be someone out there dealing with trinkets.
-Esmeralda mission starts and establishes that the trinkets are being intentionally seeded across equestria by a group of cosmic horrors. Equestrias magic is powerful, but its harmonizing effect is dangerous to them. the harmony of equestria is why the ponies basically had toonforce against the SCP's and the cosmic horrors plan is to terraform equestrias magic by influencing it with the trinkets.
- final mission begins to save the princesses and stop the big bads, Esmeralda is released from the cuffs and still fights for good, Tara returns having accepted that she needs to let people in to her heart to help the ponies she cares about, Steel is healed and Willow is Willow.
-The mission itself is played as the whole cast, flipping from perspective to perspective.
-good guys hopefully win.
The majority of the CYOAs take place in a set of complex but intertwined timelines. Initially there is a single, linear timeline but eventually splits into three branches as a result of Discord's tampering. I'm still working out all the kinks but I have the roughest of outlines made. Of the peices that are set in place Entrapment is the earliest, before the timeline branches. Next in line is RGS, taking place immediately after the split. The portal in RGS was created when Discord was trying to recreate the portal from EQG, creating the separate timelines. This timeline features both modern and classical characteristics with a hint of humanity, although it lacks said race. Heat is most likely found in this timeline, althoughlong after the split.
Now, I haven't exactly pinpointed the genesis of the next two timelines but they have well defined characteristics. The first is characterized by modern and Sci-Fi settings. GS, Urban, Sub, NE, and Space can be found in this timeline. The second features the more classical quest with a high fantasy tone. These quest feature a vast variety of races and locations. For the most part melee weapons are featured but alternative/magically powered machines and weapons can be found throughout. SS is the only definite placement while Nine Lands and M&M may be placed here.
Now this is where the timelines are linked. These worlds were created when Discord either tried to patch the tears or purposely created worlds in order to escape. This is where the magical dumping grounds are found. Thres, Hijacked, and Octavia are the prominent worlds in this outer sphere. While Hijacked acts as a dumping grounds Octavia runs perpendicularly to the three timelines, acting as a weave.
Now, I have evidence to prove these claims but at the moment I haven't completely finished putting the puzzle together. When I have the entire theory written down then I'll make my case but for the time being I can only present the rough outline.
Entrapment also contributes to this theory. That segment with Loom comes to mind.
"Whose futures do you know exactly?"
>"Random ponies, one time it might be a half changeling with a party of mares, then I may see a pegasus commanding a metal beast with her crew, the next might be a unicorn who does what you do in a false arena where the gladiators aren't truly able to kill each other.
Hinjaku's gonna murder our waifus now. It was good fun while we had them.
I really want to read this now.
Who's the unicorn in the false arena?
I did one for 11-54 awhile back and did something similar for Shades motivations in urban.
Still trying to figure out mazes.
Other than that, most of what I read isn't building to a definitive end.
Mostly cause we don't have a lot of the story in M&M.
We know there's a medusa somewhere in Canterlot and we're taking a blind guess that the harmony weapons are the answer, but we really don't have any idea what's going on or what we're doing.
Yeah, it's great. part of the game is figuring out what the picture is on the puzzle when you are being given the pieces one at a time.
Besides, solid character interaction is what I love most in a story and I enjoy M&M's characters. I wish they were given a bit more weight but what can you do.
Basically that he would grow conflicted as he was confronted more and more by Gars changes for the better. His cutiemark is the scales of justice and he justifies what he's doing to Gar on the grounds that Gar isn't a nice pony, but as Gar changes the scales tip further and further towards Shade being in the wrong for what he's doing and eventually he's going to BSOD when his sense of justice targets himself.
My current guess is that Gar is going to have a very close call andmaybe get hospitalized, Shade will keep his promise to watch Ast for us and in doing so confront the greif tha Gars injuries has caused in Ast, Floral, Hype and the breezies. He'll recognize how he felt about losing Ember in all of them and it'll basically break him.
>he's going to BSOD
He already did it once
Oh, are we talking about character breakdowns again? Like Chalk becoming super paranoid and thinking she can only trust herself in this mad city. Or maybe the fact that it would take just one bad roll or random event where something would happen to either Tradewind or Star for Softly to become a mess.
Character breakdowns, eh? Remember when Alchemy got really fucking dark.
I have an odd headcanon for Blitz.
Since he's so perceptive, he often sees things that others don't notice, things that others think don't exist or aren't there.
My headcanon is that Blitz's biggest fear is that he actually is insane, hallucinating a lot of the things he sees.
Which is why the lighthouse was more or less Blitz's perfect hell, because the things he's seeing really aren't there, and again in Hyrule Field, where he thought he saw something moving, but nothing jumped out at them right away
So basically, if Blitz had enough false alarms, if he were to experience another siren ordeal, or if people were to doubt him enough times with nothing hapening, Blitz would break.
Alright, got the CYOA running @ >>25379023
Artfag would be appreciated, as I'm ultra shit tier at art, and so would be players. More story will come today, classes may disturb schedule.
drawing fallout cyoa ponies while i wait for a guy to get back to me
Fallout CYOAs, eh?
Might I direct your attention here: >>25360775
and here: http://www.mspaforums.com/showthread.php?59266-Marejave
Having molested Steelie can only have positive effects.
She's just helping him develop some self confidence around mares and now he knows that cute unicorn from intelligence has a thing for him.
I wouldn't mind, she loves to tease but it seems a bit odd that someone who seems to have a history of being taken advantage of would be so comfortable doing the same to others.
But if no big deal is going to be made out of it, there's no real need to retcon.
my main gripe with the scene is that it's tonally unsound and jarring
mildy lewd is alright for the story, as it mostly is just played for comedy
but explicit lewd between main characters, at least to me, feels like it would be best suited for another story.
I mean, I had fun making the scene, don;t get me wrong, but I feel like its something that the story could do fine without
there's a reson no one takes advantage of her anymore. It will get covered later
though I should say the main story is like about halfway done.
you could cut it at the point that Keys goes face first into his ass and just have Tara joke that Keys was the first one to assume lewd when Tara had merely touched his cutiemark.
If anything, lewd is a very strong bonding tool.
Maybe Keys will be more confident around him.
Maybe Steel will be less of a stick in the mud and less formal.
Maybe Tara will find someone else she cares deeply about.
Maybe none of that happens. Maybe other things happen instead.
Then again, I guess it is a comedy quest in the end. It's totally fine if you don't want this experience to develop your characters.
Honestly the whole scene felt a bit weird, since being stuck in the mouth of an extra-dimensional amorphous golem that mere seconds ago was trying to kill us hardly seems like the best place for sleep molestation and blowjobs. So as far as world coherence goes I wouldn't be too remiss.
Though at the same time I kinda want to see it go forward from here and have Steel maybe loosen up a little now that the sexual tension between him and slutbat has reached it's logical conclusion. You can only do the "bastion of moral values getting flustered at signs of degeneracy" joke so many times before it becomes boring.
Plus it would make for great conversation topics in the future.
"Hey, Steel, you remember that time I gave you a blowjob while you were stuck in the mouth of a murderous cookie dough anomaly as your skeletal ensign watched and lamented her current lack of fleshy equipment?"
>"Yes, but only because you bring it up every time we get together or meet someone new. Also stop following me around, I have important guard work to do involving architectural planning."
"Are you building a pillow fort with your guard friends?"
"Can I help?"
>characters can't get none because it's tonally inconsistent
Das jus mean mang.
More seriously though, while I won't argue against retconning, I would like to point out that it's not really the scene that's tonally inconstant, it's Tara's character.
She's the one who enables anything like that to even happen by being actively lewd in a setting previously devoid of such behavior. Hell, she's arguably more jarring than Esmeralda, because Essy's tonal shakiness is her defining trait.
Regardless of the specifics of the situation her character enables it. This wouldn't have happened with Willow, or had the situation been reversed with Steel and Tara.
If taking a characters defining behavior to an endpoint leads to tonal inconsistency then the character is tonally inconsistent.
Granted we still don't know a whole lot about Tara, I would kind of assume molesting someone against their will isn't something she's particularly against. Her Witch's Eye and Singing powers already kind of lend themselves to her grossly manipulative behavior. Throw in the fact that she's actively lewd and this scene is not something unexpected of her.
As for the monster thing, would it have been better to pull Steelie out first? Maybe take his still sleeping body somewhere more private before molesting him? I don't think it would have made a big difference.
And then that was after she started using her magic to pleasure Steelie. I could see her touching butt and even putting her nose where it shouldnt go by gettting too much into it.
This sounds like just another case of a QM running lewds at an ungodly hour when anyone who would be opposed to it couldn't speak up in time. I certainly saw no one complaining while it was running, but as soon as Hijacker makes a post about it here not five minutes later, everyone is quick to take it back.
That's what I mean. No one would have really cared if it just continued on, but revealing doubts is effectively asking for input and people will give their opinion. Having to basically ask means it wasn't a significant issue to begin with.
On the other hand I'm biased because I don't like retcons in general. They affect the tone of the quest in my opinion.
While I agree I feel like he wanted to make the retcon due to not liking the idea of canon explicit lewds between main characters and didn't want to set a precedent.
Honestly I never like the Idea of random canon Lewds myself as it always seems to overtake the story when they start to show up.
Dafuq you say bitch?
Generally as long as the thread is still alive most players will keep it open. New threads are what's useful to post here.
That's not something we should encourage though.
What kind of fetish is each QM into? What kind of fetish is you favorite character into?
What fetish would make you drop a quest wholesale?
Surprisingly, it's happening.
I love Myst, and I'm glad that others play it still. It was tough going to school when I was 5 and asking if anyone knew how to get the spaceship running but no one knew what I was talking about.
Len was inspired by Myst somewhat. But he just teleports within the same world, not between them.
Would anyone be interested in playing a CYOA where you go to stay at your rich grandfather's Manor for an X amount of time, living the Nobles life with the Manor's staff as your only friends and company.
How about this: you stay at your rich grandfather's Manor for an X amount of time, living the Nobles life with the Manor's staff as your only friends and company.
But there is a catch. If you're caught having relations with any of the staff, you will be forever disowned and possibly neutered.
Catch is, the entire staff is made of extremely hot pones of the sex and orientation you dig, and it's mating season/they really really like you/anonchef used the wrong spices again.
What if instead, your grandfather is murdered while you're on the estate and the murderer is likely one of the staff. Unfortunately the police cannot make it to the estate for a couple of days due to how remote it is located so it's up to you to figure out who the murderer is! At the same time all of the staff is very attractive and pent up sexually from being isolated on the estate?
I don't want lewd for the sake of lewd
Can you just put a spoopy hidden thousand-years-old family secret, hidden behind a bookcase activated by a lever in a basement or some shit?
Like, I don't know, the old secret recipe for ruby pepper soup that made the family rich or something.
In a way, I suppose.
Kind of like a string that would snap if pulled in just the right way, if that makes any amount of sense.
I see a lot of CYOApones like this. Chalk, Harvy, Treads, Blitz, Tara, Anonguard, and Shade, to name a few.
Let's expand on that idea
Your grandpa pay doesn't just want you to breed one or more of the staff
He wants you to do a bunch of weird shit, including but not limited to
>Cumming in the stew
>catching a timber wolf, dressing it up, and taking it on a date
>Feed one of the staff a sandwich made only using your Penis.
>and tasting every cutie mark on the estate
And no other pony knows
Better still, if they know this is being dine for your inheritance, the deal is null
The only one that knows is your grandfather's butler, who has been told to remain silent and not assist you in any capacity.
>"We're all mad here."
>"We're just very good at hiding it."
>he doesn't know
Coltquest, aka trapquest, follows the adventures of a colt named emerald and his efforts to remove an enchanted cockring that prevents him from climaxing normally
What would be minimum and maximum characters you guys would want in the Manor staff?
I don't want it to be too few but I don't think I could write for twenty different characters at the same time.
And some of their jobs.
I got Butler, maid, and a tutor,
Steward, Valet, Nurse, Page/Teaboy, Game/Grounds keeper, and Gate keeper to simplify the large variety of positions. One I didn't mention is stable boy, but being as how they're ALREADY equines, that'd be... a little awkward.