>Your parent's death was not your fault... it was Yorff Arthurs
Who was Yorff? Why didn't Bruce react to this?
>But a criminal is not complicated. What you really fear is inside Yuseff. You fear Yorone Pouher. You fear Yoran Ger.
What was inside Yuseff? Why did Bruce fear it? Who was Pouher, and how was he involved with Ger?
That part would have worked if that cops line was something like "He's killing our men out there!" or something a human being would actually say.
As is, it's like that cringe worthy "you mess with one of us you mess with all of us" scene from Spider-Man