I´m working on a video-resume as a final project for school. It is based on old-school rpgs and it's full of videogame references.
What do you guys think? How can I improve it?
I'm thinking about voice-acting. Is it a good idea?
Boring jokes, reused assets out of your ass, clearly english isn't your first language, so plenty of lines fall flat, references for references' sake.
I'd give you 4/10 for making at least a working game, but it would be rejected even as a free game.
Put some effort in making it it looking unique, find someone to proofread your writing to make it more appealing and put SOMETHING for the player to do, instead of just dialogue
Thanks. That is actually some good advice.
You are right, english isn't my first language.
I do recognize there is a lot I can polish.
I guess I was more worried about the message than the game itself.
Holy fuck. No employer is going to sit through 22 minutes of badly written JRPG dialogue.
Its barely a game. Its just a video OP made. He might have made it in RPGmaker though.
Its also fucking lazy. The portraits are made with the rinnemaru games waifumaker
This is now an Anonymous Agony Thread.
File #2 when?
It means it REEKS of reddit-tier crap like "epic videogame references" and severe detachment from reality.
As I stated before, this is a school project, not something I will use while job searching.
Only the first two characters that appear were created on Rinmaru. From there on, I used my own drawings (some inspired by popular characters).
This is the kind of people that populate /v/ now
Fucking awful ribbit-tier jokes and references
Meh, at least he making the minimal amount of effort. It's is shit, but it's shit he made, he could turn it into fertilizer to make something better further along.
Honestly OP this is probably the worst content I have ever seen someone create, on 4chan, or the internet. I am seriously embarrassed for. You are creatively bankrupt and your writing is seriously fucking garbage, not even in the context of your school setting will your teachers or classmates like this. If I saw this as your presentation and I had to grade you I would give you a fucking 0, and fucking laugh during this cringe fest. You are pathetic, thanks for the laugh though.
WHY DO I STILL COME HERE WHEN IT GETS WORSE EVERYDAY?
Nah, I was the guy that gave the OP 4/10.
I actually think you can improve after you make the effort to actually start making games.
OP's project looks like shit, sure. But it's a start.
He should go to /agdg/ if he actualy wants critique on his game development.
>shouldnt you be out there looking for a job
FUCK YOU I'M TRYING.
Oh man this thread takes me back, in highschool we had to make a huge project over the course of the final year. I made a single map in RPG maker with tons of events, descriptions when you'd examine objects and stuff, and the rest was just static images maps that took me a couple minutes to make. But my teachers never played past the first map so they thought it was really good.
die in a fire.
in all seriousness tho, dont do a fucking referencial game. dont do a referencial anything. a joke or hidden little gag here and there, sure, but make your game stand on its own.
Seriously get the fuck back to reddit, and then kill yourself or wait till you present this embarrassment then kill yourself. Or better yet don't kill yourself, live out your life in the inevitable mediocrity that will be your existence.
Family guy while fucking awful, is partially successful because Mcfarlane has a good grasp on old pop culture and new. You don't have shit. You have a menial 3rd grader mentality at your jabs at humor. Everything you thought would be funny in the game is actually flat and fucking awful. Honestly it's because english wasn't your first language, but really, don't quit your day job.
The only way you would actually become a failed but somewhat more successful video game creator than you are now is if you start reading. Only if you improve intellectually will you get the quirks that makes modern humor funny. But until then you are a goy that will never amount to anything of any real significance. This is the truth that everyone will pretend to hide from you when you present this.
Relay what I just said in your mind while you present this, then pan your classmates and teachers, you will see on their faces absolute disgust hidden in feigned approval. You are a joke.
Who said that I want to be a videogame creator?
You probably didn't watch the video, or read the few lines with which I started this thread. If that's the case, I cannot take your feedback seriously.
It doesn't matter, you made a game, a shitty one, I made an inference, whatever meta bullshit about you wanting to be a writer was irrelevant. Because one thing is clear, you lack something that would help you become successful and that is talent. You are human garbage, you lack vision.
>I´m working on a video-resume as a final project for school.
>It's not meant to be a true cv
Then it's not a video resume is it?
You're not actually making the thing you're advertising "because it's a school project"
Good luck getting anywhere.
It does matter. You can't use the same criteria to evaluate different things. Would you judge a fish by its ability to climb a tree?
As for the rest, your opinions won't be taken seriously until you clearly justify them.
Because you are working towards something, based on your writing and the quality of this game I doubt you will get anywhere. I watched the whole thing, it's fucking awful and honestly you are pretty much a mongoloid. You write with a 3rd grade reading level and you won't be able to voice act or really do anything creative until you understand the nuances of the english language. I'll say it again, you are human garbage.
I said those things as a reply to:
"who the hell is going to watch a 25 minute video as a CV?"
If my purpose was to present this to an actual employer, it wouldn't be that long and probably wouldn't even be in this format. But the people I made this for will surely watch the whole thing.
I'm making everything I advertise. It's a video resume. Just not a real one.
Now that is something we can talk about. Specific enough. Thanks.
English isn't my first language. I do want to make a living out of my writing skills. But in my country, and in my language. And I'm pretty good at my language, if I must say.
Do you speak any second language? If you do, is it as good as my english?
>It's a video resume. Just not a real one.
I'm done talking to you.
"Look at this guys, it's plane."
>"B-but Anon, It's just a car with wings"
"Shut up, It's a plane. The people I made this for will know what it is. It's a plane, just not a real one"
Make a simple turn-based RPG where the player finds lost books full of Polish words that, when put in certain combinations, make up a custom magic spell. Find a girl with a good voice to say those words out loud for maximum effect.
Kek, are you actually going to defend your bullshit badly worded video-resume by attacking him online about his language skills?
He's not the one asking for feedback.
And if it's anything better for you, I'm not a native English speaker and have about 3 other languages I know.
Don't write in English if you're bad at writing English. Write in your native language or get better at writing English.
I speak French, but not fluently. I don't try to write or speak in French. I'm sure any self-respecting Frenchie would tell me to sharpen up my frogspeak or get the fuck out, which he has a right to. It's my responsibility to get better, not his.
I wouldn't tell him "WELL I BET YOU DON'T SPEAK MYYYYYY NATIVE LANGUAGE BETTER THAN I DO" because that's fucking childish.
You either didn't understand my explanation, or are just trying to over simplify it in order to refuse it, which is something people only do when they have nothing else to say.
Who is attacking? I just made a few simple questions.
Are you feeling sorry for the guy who calls other people human garbage, amongst many other offensive words? Who is the good guy and the bad guy?
I asked for constructive criticism. Not for nonsensical offenses.
And what do your language skills have to do with any of this?
Writing in english was manddatory for this school project.
And why compare to the french? Compare to the Japanese. They value a lot any minimal effort foreign people put into learning their language. I believe that is the right attitude.
>They value a lot any minimal effort foreign people put into learning their language
They do this because of a cultural tradition that tells you that you should lie to prevent awkward situations.
If you sputter out some broken moonrunes, they'll congratulate you on your "excellent japanese". It's shit, and they know it. They're just trying to prevent the situation from becoming awkward by lying to you.
The French don't have a filter like that. They'll tell you when you fucked up.
You don't learn anything if people just suck your dick all the time and never tell you where you went wrong.
I guess you're fine as long as you kill yourself
just wait until you're no longer underage and look back at the embarrasing things you made, put your name on and then uploaded to the internet.
That is actually funny.
So, if we are not good at something yet, we should not practice it, since it might dishonor and offend someone, right?
I'm ok with that. (not the "kill yourself thing").
That's what I'm doing.
Of course, I will only get better if people actually say what is the shitty part of what I'm doing. If they don't, their comments are the shitting things here since they have no practical purpose.
Thank you for stoppin gus eradicating the Polish scum.
See what happens when you stop Germany /v/ ?
This is your doing, you created this slivovice drinking video game creator with asperger's.
Jeez people like you is the reason they say being bullied is also the fault of the victim.
Grow a backbone, you clearly lack one. Get angry and use it to get good. Because you suck.
What impact would it have then? If I was the unborn fetus, they would never get to know me.
Try playing a genesis emulator in hd and see the differnce for yourself.
Why do you say it makes no sense at all?
>You dont need HD
NO! Sometimes you need HD. Good comeback, integrate that into the game
>why does it make no sense
because it's family guy the game. Only less funny but twice as autistic
Try playing a genesis on a damn CRT and see the difference. 16-bit Sprites look better on blur because it masks the, well, blockyness of the sprites. This is precicely why emulating PS1 games look like shit without filters. Don't tell me you're young enough to never had played videogames on a crt?
I don't see the relation to Family Guy. Can you be more specific, please?
I did play videogames on a crt. Say what you say, watch the video in 720p and in 480p and see the difference for yourself.
this is the family guy version of your video. Only difference your jokes are bad and nobody will laugh.
Kinda like a sitcom without a laughing track. Just dead silence
I'm sorry if I wasn't clear.
I do know what family guy is.
I also do know that you think my video is somehow similar to it, except less funny.
I just fail to understand the comparison.
There is no base of logic with you, you can't even comprehend what I am saying to you, multiple people have given you reasons to why you are a talentless piece of shit, yet you claim ignorance every time. You are human garbage because we can't engage with you, you aren't even a functioning human being at this point. You are effectively something that we insult, no more, no less, you are a blank wall that can't fight back, won't fight back, you are literally human garbage.
Go to reddit so you all can circle jerk in peace but never come back here again. Or someone like me will have to blow you the fuck out for being the ignorant foreign piece of shit that you are.
Reply to my post if you can, until then you are human garbage, and noone will take you seriously or anything you have to say. You are effectively a jester that people laugh at waiting for it to kill itself.
>You are human garbage because we can't engage with you
So Leonardo da Vinci was also human garbage because the simple folks around him disn't have the ability to reason with him. Is that what you are traying to say?
> comparing himself to da Vinci
what is wrong with you you autistic piece of shit
>Leonardo da Vinci
You need help, you actually think you are as talented as da vinci? Your mediocrity shouldn't even be uttered in the same sentence you stupid fuck. You are an embarrassment to humanity.
Hey op, I love mad men because it shows how awful advertising is. Your intention of your job is to make someone feel bad about their life and trick them into giving you money. How can you watch that show and see how every character is fucking depressed and then 'love advertising'?
Do you think you're going to look like don draper and have a threesome in LA?
No. I will try to talk in a simpler way from now on.
He stated the following: "you are human garbage because we can't engage with you."
I used something called "an example" to demonstrate that what was said is not a valid reason for calling someone human garbage.
Advertising has changed a lotsince the 60s, when Mad Men takes place.
I don't believe I will be like anyone on that show.
And I also believe that advertising is not something that aweful as you seem to believe it is. On the contrary.
You won't even defend yourself when we say the shit you made is literally worse than family guy. You are given a video for reference, and you can't even understand the humor because you are so bad at english, and yet you want us to prove to you that we are intellectually capable to communicate with you? Let me help you with a revelation, you are autistic as fuck and an embarrassment to society. No you are not smart, you aren't even close to average, you are bottom of the barrel stupid and if this video isn't absolutely fucking embarrassing to you then you need to kill yourself because you have no self awareness.
Just because most people on 4chan suffer from some kind of social anxiety which prevents them from a normal and healthy amount of exposure, doesn't mean that people from the outside are the ones with the problem.
Nothing to do with my video, but the way that some of you talk.
> Just because most people on 4chan suffer from some kind of social anxiety
you are beyond saving. I really start to believe that you are human garbage
Are you referring to yourself? Because your video is symptomatic of someone who has zero self awareness and has severe asbergers. Honestly you even had the delusion to compare yourself to Da Vinci when you clearly are mediocre as fuck. Honestly I pity you in a way, you refuse to acknowledge just how retarded you actually are. It's kinda sad, but at the same time allows me to blow you the fuck out every single retarded and asinine post you make. Really though if I can't get this through to you, you are human garbage.
Oof, if that's all you've got to say to defend your main passion in life I feel bad for you.
When you're lost and don't know what you want to do when you're older, at least you now know where to come to.
I don't want sugarcoats. I want criticism that makes sense and allows me to improve. Something beyound "you're garbage, go kill yourself".
Again, I didn't compare me to da Vinci.
>your video is symptomatic of someone who has zero self awareness and has severe asbergers
So, when a little kid goes in front of the class to read his homework (which was a text about himself) he is just demonstrating having zero self awareness and severes aspergers?
Old enough to have adult conversations. Unfortunately, it seems that I'm talking to kids...
You want me to be clearer? Advertising is communication. The human species rules over the world due to our communication skills. The better you communicate, the more success you can have. You can literally change the world. You can persuadde people to do the right thing.
How delusional are you? People are treating you like you have down syndrome because that was what was presented in your video. You wanted our opinion and this is it, you talk about women having their period in the video, and you are above 18? Honestly when people see this they will be embarrassed for you, maybe they won't say anything, but they will be embarrassed
Oh no the kid just isn't developed yet, but you are above 18 presenting content that is as naive and retarded as something a little kid would present on. You should be embarrassed that you even drew the correlation that what you made was like a little kid presenting his homework. Because that is your mindset, and it is fucking absolutely embarrassing. Please kill yourself or leave 4chan for good.
>People are treating you like you have down syndrome because that was what was presented in your video
Nope. People are treating me like that because they're rude and they like to talk trash. It's something cool that cool kids do nowadays. You just got to hate something, and when you are asked to justify your hate, you just show how badass you are by trying to be as offensive and rude as possible.
>content that is as naive and retarded as something a little kid would present on
Again, no explanation. Just more attempts at offenses.
There's that delusion again. People are shitting on you because your content and talent is garbage yet you keep implying that you actually are brilliant. You can't write, you are probably still in high school, and have some form of autism. Noone can reason with you because you won't accept your own mediocrity. You're more pathetic than anything, it honestly is sad.
>Fear only stimulates my imagination!
>And through imagination and creativity I can change the world around me!
I thought I could avoid the cringe by skimming through the video, but it's no use. It's too highly concentrated. Every line is like a self-contained shitpost.
I didn't imply I was brilliant. If I did, why would I be coming to /v/ asking for advice?
I do recognize my video can be improvef. That was my goal. To get some constructive criticism. But it is difficult, when people just say it is trash and don't tell me why.
Also, I can write, in several different languages, and I don't see what being in highschool has anything to do with this.
And you shouldn't use the term "autist" so loosely just because it is a 4chan trend. Not only it isn't an actual offense, but it actually shows how little you know of the world around you.
the video is crap because it's neither entertaining nor clever
was this elaborate enough ?
But I still have an idea who you can get a job in the vidy game industry. Go to EA or Activision, you dont need any talent at all when working there. In face talent will decrease your chance of employment
>the video is crap because it's neither entertaining nor clever
Ok. It was hard, but we're getting more specific.
How many video cv have you seen like this one? Making something unique isn't cleaver?
About being funny... The Godfather isn't funny either, but it doesn't matter (and attention: I am not comparing my video to the Godfather) since it wasn't its purpose. That's what's wrong with using the same criteria to judge different things.
Examples of constructive criticism:
Add more frames to make the animation smoother;
Try to make the stick figure look more like Goku;
Draw a fcce on it;
Add a background;
Add music and sound effects;
See how it's done?
You want criticism? Ignoring the typos out the ass, it fails to be funny, it's boring to watch and drags on and on and on and on and on. Fucking 22 minutes for a video resume that typically lasts for a couple minutes or so? The worst part is how the relevant shit is scarcely sprinkled all over the video, so you have to power through the entire pile of shit to actually cobble together the bits you care about. That is, if you don't lose them in the fucking swamp of unfunny "jokes" and references.
It's honestly on the same level as that infamous horsefucker resume or the adventure story spread over half a dozen pages, but those actually had production values. Don't worry, you'll probably pass that class of yours, but don't except more than an extremely mediocre pity grade from it and a sticker in the shape of pic related
>It's honestly on the same level as that infamous horsefucker resume
There's nothing wrong with pic related. Check your anti-equinism.
We already talked about the typos, which I agreed to be something that can be improved;
As for the "funny" element, again, it's not supposed to be funny;
About the actual content and duration of the video, that is actually constructive criticism. Now, if you were kind enough, would you tell me some examples of something that isn't useful at all and that I can just take it out to make the video shorter and less boring?
If the purpose of your video was to be boring, pointless and immature, you did a great job. As you are around 15, you delusions of self-importance, talent and intellect are pretty normal, but I can assure you that you will grow up to be a dull office or factory worker and not a writer of any kind.
>le epic reddit video game references
Scrap the entire thing, and make your own original project.
Nothing is lazier than a rpgmakeresque garbage that doesn't even come up with its own humor.
Also, pull the california redwood out of your ass. You talk like a kid, cry like a kid, have admitted to getting advice from reddit, and complain and whine when people don't mindlessly felate you under the guise of "m-muh constructive criticism".
Guess what? There is nothing in that video worth saving. There is no diamond in the rough. There are no gems buried in this mound of shit. People are telling you to start over because that's the only thing you can do.
Try being creative for a change. Have an original fucking idea for once.
Well. It's way too long. Walls of texts wont keep anyone interested. Especially if they are full of typos. Jokes are unfunny. Soundtrack dont really go too well with everything. Also seems you are full of yourself.
school doesnt mean shit
bachelor at the university doesnt mean shit
Once you get a job it matters
> everything up to this point of your life is pointless and will not benefit you in any way
>bluh bluh bluh look at how smart I am
this is what I'm talking about
Humble yourself, and stop fucking crying. Your video is shit, and no amount of whining and crying about how intelligent you are will change that
"Creativity is a phenomenon whereby something new and in some way valuable is created (such as an idea, a joke, a literary work, painting or musical composition, a solution, an invention etc)."
How wikipedia defines it.
> come up with something new
>Guys, references make me original and funny and creative
You're not inspired. That's the problem. You're just throwing around "epic references" at a shallow attempt at humor. You're also not creative either, but I already said that. Your video is a fucking joke, and nobody in their right mind is going to tell you that you're creative or interesting.
Make up something original, or fuck off.
It's cringeworthy, I know you're trying to be unique but it's painful to watch, just make a regular cv, you can show off your talents when you land a job man.
Nigga restart the whole game from scratch.
Play through the entirety of Lunar Silver Star Story and Eternal Blue, PS1 version preferably.
Then you'll understand what is good dialogue and what isnt
Wow. Some OC. Really cleaver and funny!
You're the ones whining. Only upset people tell others to go die.
What kinf of sountrack would you suggest? Does it have to be with the 8bit format of them? Or should I choose different songs entirelly? If so, can you give me an example?
So, an employer will give the exat amount of chances to a highschool graduate and somewhone who went to an university and has got a lot of acclaimed things to show?
I couldn't watch it all the way through.
This was terrible. Droning music with blah graphics and it's just in general boring. It didn't pop very well, and it didn't look like it was getting exciting at all.
How does that definition from such a reliable source proves that there is no creativity in my work?
The thing is, it is different to write dialogue for epic adventures and banal events like searching for a job.
I am the last one you quoted.
You understood nothing. You have no idea how the world works. And besides that you are so arrogant and stuck up it's unbelievable. I hate kids like you, all spoiled and shit.
Still, I want to say one thing. There are many high school graduates that deserve a job more than some guy with a diploma. Disgusting how you treat people like crap because he just a lower level of education without even knowing them. Back to the reddit elite club
Honestly all the jokes and references feel incredibly forced. Barely any of the interactions feel "natural" at all and they drag on way longer than they should. It doesn't feel like the video is going any where. I mean yea, the character is trying to get into advertising but nothing actually happens for a really long time.
>As for the "funny" element, again, it's not supposed to be funny;
Then what was the point of the line at 3:15; "She thinks I play the piano in a whore house." Why even say that if you aren't trying to be funny or cute in some way?
>Are you saying I'm not creative because I use references and get inspired by outside sources?
Honestly this doesn't feel like you were inspired at all. If someone linked me this video with no context I would have assumed you ran out of ideas. The references don't add enough to be worth while yet are forced into the audiences attention by being apart of the dialogue. You use full sentences to make some references rather than using subtlety. This is where your biggest problem is.
If you're so smart how come you're arguing on the interweb?
>autistic highschooler can't even read my post correctly
Get off of the high horse jesus christ
Listen, acting like an angry kid doesn't help you any. You're uninspired as fuck, and whining when someone calls you out on it isn't going to change it. You should really act more humble, though. Nobody likes helping an arrogant highschooler.
Ignoring all the delicious, low-hanging fruit you've constantly throwing around, here's some more genuine advice.
Really, just trash the whole thing and make something entirely different. It's just way too much effort to salvage that thing and turn it into something watchable, and even then it just screams LOL VIDEO GAMES AMIRITE so hard it's going to just induce cringe, head-shaking and people laughing at you.
I used to make shitty MS paint video back in the day myself and the quality was really low but at least I thought about the jokes and puns all by myself and some people actually found them entertaining for a short period of time.
Your video is shit and appeals to nobody.
The thing is Lunar covers both. Only the last part of the game if about saving the world, the rest is a group of kids adventuring and shit.
And throughout the whole game the tone is pretty lightweight in towns, so stop searching excuses and play the damn games.
What are the chances that OP is somehow trolling us ? I can't believe this is legit
At this point, OP is just being the faggot he is and trying to defend himself.
he would grasp on anything he could and blame every mistake to somebody/something else.
Just a reminder,
The fact that you require people to give you suggestions here,
and the fact that you are being called human garbage.
had already proven that how much of a failure you are.
You know what? Fuck all of you. I don't know what I was thinking coming here asking you people to look at it. You clearly only exist to beat people down and hide around like the trolls you are because you're too ashamed of successful and creative people and think that their the bad. You keep saying to grow up and calling me underage but it is YOU WHO NEED TO GROW UP.
So it's actually a 3rd degree course?
Jesus fucking christ, the professor is going to grind his ass into fucking mincemeat, cook burgers from it and serve them to the rest of the class as a warning. I've seen high schoolers make far more impressive things than this
I agree with you. People shouldn't be judged only by their academic status. Nevertheless, and here's what I was trying to say, those skills really are important. Remember I was replying to your "school doesn't mean shit" statement.
Music and graphics are an homage to old-school videogames. Too bad you don't like them.
>Then what was the point of the line at 3:15; "She thinks I play the piano in a whore house." Why even say that if you aren't trying to be funny or cute in some way?
You didn't get it because you are not the target of this video. If this was real, it would be showed to people who work in advertising. And people who work in advertising know this famous quote "Please don't tell my mother I work in advertising, tell her I play the piano in a brothel". It was something people used to say when advertising was not that popular.
Its better than my shitty unfinished game
OP, I know people are acting like assholes to you but acting like an asshole back when you came here for criticism is a terrible thing to do and can only make things worse for you. The basic concensus is that your game isn't very good and you need to work harder. People here aren't ashamed of creative and successful people. They just hate thinks like references as the main source of comedy and things like that. Work harder and keep trying. That's my advice.
>This is valid as a final project
I guess I'm wasting my life doing digital sculpt and animation.
Here in Spain there is a pretty popular school of video game creation. It's a 3 year course and they teach you just the basics to make shit for mobile devices.
And you have to pay 8000€ each year.
the fact that the OP could've actually posted this and be serious about it is the funniest shit in the world
Make up all the excuses you want, but at the end of the day, you're not creative or funny.
References out the ass are not a solid attempt at humor. The only thing stopping you from improving is yourself. As soon as you accept this and stop acting like a giant faggot, you might be able to create something passable.
>Music and graphics are an homage to old-school videogames. Too bad you don't like them.
Honestly, I got more of a generic RPGMaker shovelware feel out of them though. "Retro" doesn't automatically equal good
>poorly animated Pokemon sprites
>clashing character portraits
>pretentious tone riddled with grammatical errors and inconsistencies
>those absolutely forced 4th wall jokes
>references as subtle as a kick to the groin
>But But But But But But
>You didn't get it because you are not the target of this video.
Its not about "getting it," you outright said the point of the video is not to be funny, but as you just described the intent of that was to be funny. What are you actually trying to do?
Hey cunt, you dont know what I do or dont like, so go swallow a fucking wall of dicks. Get off your fucking high horse and kill yourself.
>yfw im playing fucking Last Scenario, an old ass RPG maker game of all things.
>If this was real, it would be showed to people who work in advertising
No, it wouldn't.
>It was something people used to say when advertising was not that popular.
Actually, the original quote was about bankers.
Oh, I almost forgot. The beginning part where the mom urges the MC to go get a job? Holy fuck that was just cringe central, I don't know what angle you were going for with it. Funny? Clever? Something else? All I got was unrealistic, baffling and even infuriating.
Apparently, it's supposed to be a "creative video resume" for some class in a polytechnic institute.
Yes, he made that shit for a college tier course. Let that sink in for a minute
>Video no longer available.
It's too late, you high horse faggot.
I'll re-upload in a few minutes.
Can't say I'm exactly surprised.
OP, if you're still reading: try posting that video on one of the more serious, slower boards. They're sure to offer you some good, constructive criticism. No, seriously
I'll just download it from him before it gets twken down and reupload on a dummy account faggot.
I just finished skimming through this thread, holy fucking shit.
Who the fuck advertizes this place to twelve-year olds? Reminds me of that one time a child made a thread about Minecraft.
Wow, OP is literally going to go no where in his life if this is how he responds to criticism, no matter how harsh.
>People call his video shit
>he asks them for criticism
>he gets criticism
>can't take it so he tells everyone their criticism is wrong
>gets called out on his bullshit
>starts talking about how he is so much better than them and has won awards
>gets called out on his bullshit again
>makes excuses about how everyone either doesn't understand the references or appreciate the inspiration
>gets called out on his bullshit for the third time
>removes his video and runs away
In any job the majority of the stuff you do at first will be shit and people will tell you its shit, its how you handle being told its shit that decides whether or not they keep you. If you actually accept that its shit and actively work to make it better they will keep you and you will get better. If you do what OP just did you would be fired so fucking fast.
>you're too ashamed of successful and creative people
The word you are looking for is envious, not ashamed.
That being said, you came for advice and presented your product, the people has spoken, we don't fucking like it. Were you expecting a standing ovation? This is fucking /v/. People here are bitter and mean spirited. Learn to deal with it. As if you are the only person around here who got shit for their shitty OC. I coulldn't even count how many times I'Ve been called an unfunny faggot even if I took note of every single one of them.
successful and creative? Not with that crybaby attitude, you're not fooling anyone, your head is far far up your ass and the first step you should take toward a better understanding of originality and comedy is taking it out of there.
Remember, kids: criticism is to be expected and don't throw a preachy fit when people say mean things about your amateur work.