The demo for Dashbored is up!
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Feedback is greatly appreciated.
No. It doesn't look good. If you want to get absolutely any money from anybody you need something that looks a little bit competent or appeals to the niche you're trying to sell do. Your graphics are crude, but not in the same way that Lisa and Undertale's are. It's no Yume Nikki or OFF visually, either. Remove your campaign, find an artist, and reboot.
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The art style is still too unrefined at this point, I would suggest reworking the sprites (characters for example are way too small) and making custom graphics for the menus. Spice the battle system up, it's just the default one. Music is good for the atmosphere you are trying to achieve. Maps should be smaller and less empty.